All Comments on 'When You're Near Me'

I couldn't take my eyes away from the story. I was riveted. Thank you for allowing us the pleasure of sharing such a beautiful and very fulfulling story.

The story has been written really well. The story develops slowly and steadily. One of the best lez romances ever written. I read this story quite often.

One of the most amazing love stories between two women I've read, it reminded me a great deal of myself, a truly outstanding story.

Really loved your story. Like some of the others i tend to stay away from the long stories but yours kept me hooked and it was well worth reading the 23 pages (even if it did take me til 5am to finish it) :-) Well done - Caz

i like another have never left a comment yur story was near perfect. i uselly dnt read the long ones. but i couldnt help myself. the only fault was the sex. there first time shouldve been in

Great detail. the best scene

just let me say that i never comment on a story, but to this, u deserve high praise...truly a magnificent story, long but absolutely magnificent..i will most definately be looking for more of your stories

I have never left a comment for the numerous stories I've read on this site ... until now. Although it was probably the longest story I've ever read, it was also the most wonderful story I've ever come across. Once I started, I couldn't stop until I got to the end. I enjoyed it so much that I've probably read the whole thing 5 times already. Please continue to write as you clearly have many fans according to all the comments written. You are truly talented and I hope to read a new story from you very soon.

i've been on both sides...fearing pda...and also the one hurt because of her fears. i couldnt stop reading this story. i am very glad i read it from start to finsh. congrats on a happy ending

Simply wonderful that was... I could not stop reading for the life of me. You have a writing talent!

Very well written. The transitions throughout their relationship were realistic very becoming of the emotional states they were both in. Once I started I couldn't stop until I got to the end. Beautiful love story.

One of the best if not the best story i have read.

I've been reading on this site casually for about 3 years now and I have never ever been compelled to leave a comment. Until now.

You're a gifted writer and your story is one of the most compelling and touching romantic stories I've read in my live. So please, please, please...write more!

So far this is the best story I've read. I really loved it. Thanks for writing it.!!!

I've never read a story and ended up really caring about the characters before, marvelous!

Long, very romantic, very sensual, not much sex. I think this is erotica from a womans point of view. Guys, pay attention!

Very good very well written. Excellent.

I know that a lot of stories on here are all about getting to the sex as fast as possible. But I like the stories with back round, and that are written with heart. This is one of those stories. I love the long ones and I think this is the best one I have ever read. I loved all the characters. Thank you. I hope that you write more in the future, because I will be reading it

I like this. It was very romantic, and I often said to myself "Will they ever get together?" I was happy that they did. I thought the sex scene's could have been a little more descriptive, I like stories that have a good balance of romance and lust, that make my heart ache as well as turning me on. But i loved the romance of this. Good job.

one of my favorite stories..I read this all the time and I cant get enough of it...

this is an amazing story..such good writting, pls keep it up,

Well written romantic love story. The emotional connection of the characters is captured very well and the lack of graphic physicality makes for a refreshing read. 5/5

it's a wonderful story. i can not stop read it, and i read it over and over again. it's not just about sex, i mean i read many lesbian stories, but it's always about sex ( a quickie-cheap sex stories. but this is different. you talked about love, feelings, somethings that others authors forget to describe in their stories. (They only remember the sex part and exploit it, which i hated so much. seems like a lesbian to do is only about sex. well, we don't) the characters you created, feel so alive. it really touches my heart. if only i can find that kind of love (or let it find me)....oh i just can dream about it. well, i hope one day i can really find my real love, just like jessie and ashley. k

Glad that this ain't another bloody sleazy dull story! Really like this, makes me wanna read more and more. I'll raise all my thumbs to you. Keep on writing good stuffs! Gawd, I'm in love with Jessie! ;)

this is the best story that ive ever read! gosh.

This story is the longest and the best I read here on Literotica!!!

I come back and read it over and over and over...

If you're only looking for sexstories-go away!

This is true love at it's best!!!

I guess I'm kind of jealous 'ccause I don't have such a great love in my life... but now I know what to look for!!!

Read this story, please... even if it's long it's time well spent!!!

Syrson.

Said Coltrane, enough said says I^^.

Thank you for writing this story, this is by far the best story I've read on literotica. You've truly created characters that feel real. I think you should seriously consider getting this published in a book. I hope you'll write a sequel at some point :)

I liked all of your stories but this one was amazing. It is soo romantic. It is wonderful to have a romance to read!

Thank You for all your hard work. You have written my favorite story.

Beautiful. Thank you for not submitting just a cheap sex story. Do write more. (: And yes, find more substitute for the blond and brunette. lol

Amazing. One of the longest stories I've ever read on Lit, and also one of the best. I love the character development... great work ^_^

I really liked the story, I liked how the story line flowed

and you didn't cheapen it w/ tawdry sex. Only one criticism - don't keep saying the blond or brunette we already had the characters names. Other than that it was a fantasic read.

Touching and well done, particularly in the manner that the story was dragged out (meant in a complimentary way). At times the dialog was a bit confusing. Suggest you find alternatives to "the blond" etc. But a relatively minor point and very affecting even so. Readers who liked this also might like the following:

The Shy Girls by Chris

My Friend Casey by Chris

Angela by Destinie21

Meeting Destiny by Renzajones

Jacqueline & Diane by Heels Lover

A Benign Something by jtmalone70

Scents of Heaven by Penelope Street

Most of these will be on Literotica Some might be in the Lesbian section of nifty.org

this story is one of the best things i have ever read please write more

This is a truly superior example of erotic storytelling. Reading this story was more like watching a film. Excellent dialogue and character development. Kudos to you StormyNite!

loved it

This was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. The characters were so real. It was just so loving and it all made you feel the love they had for each other. I applaud your writing skills and wait to read anything and everything you care to post.

Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful story. I enjoyed every word, every moment of your characters.

I do hope to see more of your work. Thank you again.

I almost felt honoured to share in this ever so special love story! As a tale of romance between two individuals as they come to terms with their true feelings in a world filled with fear and outright maltreatment of gays and lesbians, it spins a tale so real it truly strikes a cord. My extensive experience with the world of gays and lebians has taught me a respect all as God's people. We are all the same and should be respected as such.

Okay, you used more words than even I am used to, and that's saying something. Except for wishing that it had been broken into multiple chapters / submissions for easier reading, I absolutely loved this story. I do wish I knew what happened with Breanna, Morgan and Ashley, but that hardly a major concern.

This is the story for those of us who want to like and know our characters. It is the type of story for those who want it all to actually mean something. And it is definitely a story for those of us who actually like romance. Bravo!

a lovely story; well worth the read

An unbelievable story. It kept me captivated until the very end, not to mention the tears that I shed. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing it!

This was a very hot lesbian story. The tag described it well. It's a lesbian romance. While I might be a cynic at times, I find the romantic aspect a refreshing one, especially after the clear frustration that Ashley expresses in her essay. There is no question that these two women not only desire each other, but love each other very much. One finds oneself rooting for them to work out.

It is also very sexy, and I'd have to give this one a 5. Men will like the lesbian sex between two lovely women and women will like the romance between two people completely in love. While there is nothing wrong with casual sex and stroke stories (I've written several myself), there is also nothing wrong with this passionate, more sentimental type of erotica. Warning: it's 20 some Lit pages long, but it's worth the read if you have any spare time.