All Comments on 'Where Angels Fear to Tread'

But well written nevertheless.

Interesting start for a story.Not really your style but i'm curious what happens next.

....what all the fuss was about if you eventually ended up writing for this site again. Welcome back. I like the concept of this story. Yeah, well I know this comment will probably be deleted because of our 'history.' Just wanted to say my piece.

Just some else registered under her name, since its free. Anyway nice story ;)

Hello lass I do hope its yersell decided to give those losers a poke in the eye. It really would be a better site if only members were allowed to post but there are some miricles even I wont hold my breath for. Great start and I know if its oor DK it will only get even better.

It's good to see your work back.

This is good an I hope your new book will be available soon I can not wait to read it. I continue to read your stuff here as well as on the stories on line site as I said I can't get enough of your writting looking forward to gettingyour new book as well thank you again for all of your stories.

Interesting story. And as Usual you have my full attention and I cant wait to see more

And with a great story too. Looking forward to Chapter 2 :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!! Who can resist a fallen angel?? Please hurry up !!

The life of a guardian angel is so trying.

I really enjoyed this, Dani. What a fun little read.

Welcome back.

No matter what beach we find ourselves on I must say that all of us at ScouriesWorld are delighted at your return. LITEROTICA was a worse place without you.>>>Seeing this is the first story you’ve posted let me give you a word of advice that I received some three years ago from an irate reader. He wrote: “You (so and so), if you are going to write a multi chapter story make (xxxxing) sure that we know it when we start reading. I read the whole (xxxxxing) thing and then I found out it was only chapter (eefffing) 1.”<<< GOOD LUCK …and remember, quality is much more important than quantity…jaime

What a great story to return with. Really like this one and look forward to seeing where you take us. At least now we can find out here when your books are coming out.

how nice to have you back, and with a wonderful story to boot. can't wait for more.

I loved it. Please post a new chapter soon. Glenn

Nice start, but not quite up to former standard. Makes me wonder why...

After all you said about it, you needed this place more than you thought. But it shows Laurel and Manu don't hold grudges.

the advantages I have with advertising my books here. I have a new book coming out in print next month. I couldn't advertise since I wasn't a literotican author, now I am, so I can. Thanks so much for all the welcoming words and for those of you who have said such nice things in your emails.

I am so glad you are back! I can't wait to read more of this story...and hopefully some of your others as well.

i am so glad you returned

Welcome back Dani,

Glad to see your story(ies) here again. Fallen angel and the devils demon? Yum, sounds like dirty work but I'll bet he's up for the job.

There is far too much behind the scenes nonsense on this site,and far too much "politics".Without readers ,like all sites this site would soon fold up.I do not care who the author is,as far as I am concerned I judge each story on its merits and will vote as I see fit.This is a good story and as such I have given it maximum points.

A great first chapter and I can't wait to read more.

I think this is an interesting beginning and am anxious to see where you plan on going with it. Please continue and update often.

It seems kind of disjointed and unbelievable. Like, is it really feasible that a stranger on a train is going to be able to tell a jilted woman the exact reasons for her fiance's infidelity? Maybe if there had been some build up instead of oh in pops an all knowing all seeing angel who is now going to magically fix everything. And why did the ending just drop off? Even if this was only one chapter in a story, I found it lacking.

Since I'm new here, and never read your previous contributions, I'm fairly unbiased. I liked this. I love the premise and your main character is very believable. My only suggestion would have been ending the first chapter with the very beginning of the next assignment instead of halfway through. More of a cliff-hanger. And the sex was a bit gratuitous. Of course, all sex is good sex, so what the heck...

To the reader who commented on why a complete stranger would walk up to you on a train and start fixing your problems, it works because of the story that precedes this one. That is where that scene comes from. I think it works regardless, but if you read the first story it works better.

Welcome back, Danielle. I'm so glad you've decided to post on here again. This story is intriguing and I'm excited for what's next (I'm about to move onto your next chapter...) Keep writing!

Thank god I didn't think you were coming back where have you been! Is everything ok? Oh and LOVE the new story as always!

Soooo glad you're back!!!

awesome as usual. Go glad to have you back here. I went to the other place only to read your work. I prefer it here. It's more computer friendly here. So I hope you are back to stay.

Glad to have you back DK. I didn't know where you were moving too so missed all your stories and there were a few i would liked to have finished reading. If you could send me the site so i know .. would be much appreciated. Good work as always

better than I will. It's easy to see the appeal, and kudos to the writer and readers who make each other so happy. This is something that I'd see a lot of people reading, like something in the grocery store paperback rack. I'd probably thumb through it just to see what the fuss was about, and then put the book back, and wish everyone health and happiness, as I went to the library to check out Joyce or Faulkner, again.

We all bow down to your superior taste in literature. Truly you have impressed us all with your interest in Joyce and Faulkner.....