by blondechristine2012
I do love you're writing. For me, the eroticism of the actions increases, when shown beside your humorus thoughts. Hmmm, wonder if that makes me odd. :-) And the best sex should contain humor until thinking becomes impossible. You write that very well.
Another 5 from me
Please make it part of a series! This was really superb -- thank you. Will five stars help at all?
A real turn on I'd love to have been there watching you masturbating at the end.
and not least for your frankness. Eager to read the follow-up now ...
This is so from the heart, so what a submissive feels. Thank you, it's wonderful.
A great story, indicative of a time now gone.
Beautifully descriptive and well written.