All Comments on 'While in Jamaica'

Enjoyed your writing. Keep writing what turns you on.

Nicely done. Well written, story line flows smoothly.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I'll also have to go back and read your earlier series. You get just enough tease, but not too much as to be annoying. She sounds like a hot woman who is lucky enough to have a husband who isn't jealous, but wants to please her however he (or someone else) can.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

excellent! Make love, not war!!!