All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping'

I enjoyed the story very much. Thank you for writing it.

Good story.

I really enjoyed reading this and i hope there's more to come! Keep up the good work!

I loved both of your stories today, they were so erotic. Please keep writing.

You made one critical error in the 10th paragraph when you changed from the 3rd person voice to first person, then quickly changed back. This was a mistake that careful proofreading would have caught. That mistake was difficult to ignore though I did enjoy the remainder of the story.

I have read many mother/son incest stories, but this has to be one of the most original and best stories that I have read. Keep up the good work

I have read two of your stories, one about the swimmer and this one, "While You Were Sleeping". I have enjoyed those stories more than almost any others I have read here, and so I thank you for writing them and sharing them with us.

And if you do continue the other story, that would be just fine.

Regards, Michael (aka Fubar..)

If I could write like this!!!! The story was "REAL" It could really happen incently no bipe bam thank you ma'm really loving and most of all it could happen I could go to bed now. Thank You billyd

I really enjoyed reading this story, it is great. I have read all of your stories several times over, they are all great. I wish you would write a second chapter to this one as well as to Snowdown in the Rockies.

This is an excellent story by a gifted writer. It's main virtue lies in displaying the lust of the mother for her son's big dick and Jake's equal lust for his mother's wet twat. It's not one pushing the other, but the natural coming together of a maternal cunt and a boy's stiff prick. Lizzie is attracted by how absolutely great looking her boy is, so big and strong, she can't take her eyes off what he's got swinging in his shorts, she even admires his cute boyish ass. Jake is, naturally, attracted to his mom's dripping snatch because, well, it IS his mother's, and every normal healthy son is fascinated by his mother's twat! When he fingers her pussy, Jake even jizzes in his pants! He's in tip-top shape and carrying around a pair of overloaded balls he's just gotta unload. Where's the best place for a boy to spurt his creamy sperm? Up his own mother's cunt, of course! And that's where Jake'll be unloading his hot young balls from now on!

Your story had the perfect buildup.

not much love and passion in it. need to shown much love and nudity. mothers complete nudity is every teenage sons wish specially her bare ass. mother is the close person of every teen.

Enjoyed the story, you were able to convey the love they had for each other

Very well written .....

YOU HAVE A GREAT WAY WITH MOTHER/SON INCEST. I HAVE READ MANY OF YOUR STORIES. YOU SHOULD DO THIS FULL TIME AND KEEP ALL YOUR FANS HAPPY. THANK YOU , I WILL REMAIN A FAN AS LONG AS YOU KEEP WRITING. AND BEYOND. ......................................................LAROC OF AGES

HOLY SHIT

Blew a nice nut!

Just that little touch of plausibility! Great job - oh yea!

If i was that son, i wish that damn heater was never repaired...

a touch of reluctance, uncertainty, and curiosity, culminating in surrender. nice.

A great story, nice lead up, strong finish.

I think this was wrote well. I hope you decide to add more chapters to this, it would be great to read more.

I wish i had the talent to write line this!

Never got ad lucky as to have sex woth my mom, but i have sucked on her breasts and tasted her private parts and cum on her while she was out child's sleeping. Being so close to her sex while wearing her panties and lingerie was the ultimate experience.

I've read a lot of these stories and this is my first comment, but I felt like I needed to tell you that your writing is far and away in a league of its own! The way the story flows and how you made the characters real and believable is not easy. I also appreciate the amount of back story you give, not too much and not too little. Really superb. Keep writing!

still getting visits and positive comments

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And very good too! Thank you!

I like this story. THANK YOU Author!

A good story I liked it.

great story, I hope part two is in the works.

I Wish You Were Here, I Would Shove My Penis In Your Wet Pussy +254708715089 For Anything Mum

That was a great story. Very hot! To the "Anonymous" Fuckers that need to tell you the mistakes, Fuck you.

Very sexy and well written love the slow lead up to the final night

I wish I would be get the chance to sleep with my mom under the same blanket.

Great progression of events. Most relationships, including incest, start with something unique. The author captured this with being under the blanket.

5 Stars.

Thank You.

It would be great to wake up with a lady playing with me

Very sexy story

Loved it.

It was really amazing and gave me a raging hard on...one of the best i have read

Beautiful story!