All Comments on 'White Goddess Rules Black Women'
by Samuelx
- 5 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou have all the components of a good story yet you screw it up every time. I'm not sure if you have a need to pump out one loosely put together story after another or its just the fact that you are unable to give any depth to your characters.
Maybe just maybe if you took the time to read some of the other stories in this genre, you'll be able to come across with whatever erotic tale you're trying to tell.
Anonymousover 14 years agoWhat a laugh. Samy give depth to his characters? First, Samy would have to have some depth himself. There has no evidence of any deep thinking in his little boy mind. Second, he would have to stop his cut and paste stories and actually try to write something new. Never happen.
lancewmover 14 years agoPretending to be a black man, trying so hard to make blacks look stupid..
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoNever stop writing!
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