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Click here"I want Grace." The child burst in to tears.
Her words pulled him back to the present situation. He nodded gravely. He could understand the child wanting Grace -- he understood it very well, but in a vastly different manner. He wanted answers. He wanted no more confusing enigmas. He wanted his self-containment, his peace back.
But most of all he wanted Grace's shapely legs wrapped around his waist, her tight heat drawing him in. He made a silent oath that he would have that, by God he would, but until then...
"Can you sit a horse?" he asked Justine.
She shook her head.
"Very well."
He got up from the floor and stretched his weary limbs. He would take the child home this very night. Moreover, Grace was going with them. He would not travel with a girl child alone; she needed care he had no earthly idea how to provide.
And he would not leave Grace to his servants. God knew what she could induce his powerless underlings to do if she could manipulate him so effortlessly.
Was he playing straight in to her hands? Contrary to making him angry the thought excited him. He had ways and means of limiting her, he found himself hoping, praying she would put him to the test.
- COMMENTS
Skorpion49over 14 years ago"Was she controlling him, using him?"
Of course she was. She is female! Excellent twists here and the self-healing hymen will no doubt catch on in years to come...well done TruantOne on testing the boundaries and coming up with original stuff. I'm sure you've got the ending all worked out and I can't wait. Just make sure it's unpredictable and I'll be happy!
Bianca_Sommerlandover 14 years agoMy only suggestion would be making the chapters a little longer, but I know from experience how hard that can be. If it's a choice between quantity and quality you're making the right one. I'm really curious about how things are going to go with the little girl. I like how consistant your characters stay.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI am really enjoying your story, it flows so well and before you know it you are at the end of the chapter-drat!
Am sooooooo looking forward to the next instalment.
Best wishes
cuileann
mellowmelover 14 years agoThis story is so wicked good! Your writing just pulls me into the story as if I were there, a bystander, watching it all unfold. I am betting Grace was a nun in training when she was turned. And so therefore she foregoes human blood. However the story goes and whatever turns it will take, I can assure you that I will avidly devour it and love it. You are very talented!!!!! Melanie
Anonymousover 14 years agoFirst Non-Human story I have read in Literotica, and enjoyed it immensely. Witing for more of White Heart...
