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Rape not 1st time

ITs nice and all that he wanted her, but... locking someone up, and it's just a bit buggy.... but over all I can't say that I wouldn't do the same... If I had to rate this 6 1/2 out of 10. the morals are completely wrong, but the story was adequate.

How old are these people? It seems as though they are very young in age. Young as in under 21.

You really are a rapist aren't you Ashon you sick asshole! 1*

I can't keep up with your stories, but right now this is my favorite.

Her virginity was taken at night and not by the one she thought was splitting her virginity. Reading how the second time was done with no resistance gave the story a different slant on what was definitely rape. I didn't get the complete relationship between she and Frank.

Even a higher proportion of typos and such than your usual. Bleah.