All Comments on 'Who Dat Girl?'

I was really impressed by the care with which you introduced the players, and the exciting way you moved them onto the board. One of the best opening chapters I've ever read on this site: I am genuinely chomping at the bit for the next instalment. (That final conversation between the girls is typical of the success you've had in keeping this story grounded; I truly hope you can maintain that level of credibility.)