All Comments on 'Who Is this Woman I Married?'

..."holy christ you fucking idiot you are one stupud mother fucker...

this was so easily telegraphed and held NO surprises at all.

The cunt whore wife has had a LONG term lesbian affair with Jenny . Its OBVIOUS they were lovers at college for a prolonged period of time.

the wife is either 1 ) a lesbian or 2) Bi sexual. Thats fine but you cannot marry ANYONE and hide that from them. The marriage is based on a fraud

and THIS 2nd massive deception NEEDS to be dealt with. Having the idiot husband join in with a 3some might be hot for some readers but it is NOT going to solve that issue.

3rd Jenny was staying at HIS house as his - and the wife's guest. HE is the one betrayed here. Yet she slamms the door in his face ?!

Just because she is lesbian doesnt mean she has to act like an asshole. She is Just a horribble person.

It is to obvious the two women were fucking when he first came in on them. And to let your wife run around and interrupt the time you have together is giving her permission to cheat. For all you PC people out there you dont own your spouse when you married you joined and became basically one organism, the married unit. One cant play these games without stating out loud I dont love you, I dont respect you or our marriage, and the other person means more to me than you do or ever did. This story has only one end, him divorcing her for adultry, there is no other possible logical or emotional ending. Why drag it out into chapters went they arent needed and could be handled in one serving? You cant do this to a person you are married to if you actually are sexually happy and in love with the person you are married to, in this case he is just a meal ticket.

Such vitriol over a fictional couple in a fictional story. I didn't say they were perfect, I didn't say they had a normal or perfect life. They are flawed. Both of them. I know there are stories I don't like but what happened to you guys to make you want to write such nasty comments? If you don't like it or have constructive comments, that's one thing, but don't you think these were a little over the top?

Deadeye_76, keep writing your story as I am curious to see how it develops.

and let the story develop. Of course the happy ending is outa question, because there is that small thing called TRUST, but sometimes it makes people realize "the good thing", and make'em cherish it even more. NO ONE IS PERFECT- REMEMBER. For what its worth, I liked it a lot. It felt very real. THANKS

Okay, it was obvious of their previous relationship. I thought you telegraphed it well....apparently not well enough for some of "our' more vocal critics. They got so enraptured in your writing they got completely sucked into the characters. That means you are doing great! I am sure hoping you plan on at least one more chapter!

I enjoyed the story, as obvious as it was it was fun to see how he was going to find out.

And please don't listen to the "one woman in whole life is the absolutely most they'll ever get - if they get lucky at all" haters who trash such stories.

Would love to read the resolution.

Just wish the set up wasn't so obvious. Wish there was another male in the story to give it some added tension and a red herring. Nonetheless, you write very well, with superb dialogue. Thank you deadeye. Now onto part deux.

Been used before but you brought it in smoothly and peaked out interest.

Thanks for supplying something worth reading though the classification of group sex normally turns me away, but in this case the title and the flow held me.

The questions brought up are already answered in the text if you read it over.

She is bi and Jenny is a lesbian. She is a liar by omission but not by commission.

She loves her husband and is attract to Jenny... This leaves her an emotional wreck... Back in our day it was common to expect partners to give you some details, but I believe that in this day an age most people follow don't ask, don't tell!

Now though she should be up front with him before proceeding but it sounds as if Jenny is lieing, and they have not re-iniated their Sapphic relationship, yet...

Interesting tale so far. I Figured the women were having an affair. I hope ch. 2 show where the husband fits in all of this.

get an answer/////one you like I hope, TK U MLJ LV NV

Are you deaf, dumb AND blind? I hate stupid husbands.

Divorce the cheating slut. And then try writing something clever that has a shred of originality to it. This was BAD.

Even Ray Charles could have seen what was happening here before the husband.

Gee, Honey, are you alright??? You know you can tell me anything???? WUSS, WIMP, LIMP DICK, CLUELESS! GIVE ME A FUCKING BREAK! I KNEW WHAT WAS COMING AS SOON AS YOU HAD THE TWO WOMEN IN THE KITCHEN NOT DRESSED! BUT HIM BEING SO FUCKING CLUELESS IS ABSURD, RIDICULOUS AND JUST PLAIN PATHETIC!

that didn't get telegraphed at all.

He can read his wife like a book....NOT!