All Comments on 'Who Wants to Live Forever?'

I was hanging on the last sentence like. Nooooooo! How could she stop right here. You have so got to finish this story. Next chapter please.

I loved this story but you left me hanging where's the rest?

I loved reading this story. Would like to read more.

That was a great start to the story it would flow better if you didn't have so many grammar issues. I can't wait for the next chapter maybe you can have someone prof read it first though.

Are you going to write anymore???? Because I really love this story.

A great story with an unusual plot, wonderful characters, and a possible romance to come.