All Comments on 'Whore'

That one fooled me. Pretty good story.

If it had been any other category. Newer would of read it. LOVE. Slap*hapy*papy. #9

Loved it! It’s well-written and extremely clever. Even better... it gave me a great idea for a fun, kinky night with my honey!

The ploy of having a wife act as some sort of strange sex object is well used in Literotica and I usually can spot it coming, but here I was honestly surprised. The whore-wife's narration sounded real and she honestly sounded tired. The dialog was concvincing and this was well done. I ought to read more of this author's stuff to see if she can maintain this level of writing skill. 4*

That was a great story, with a great ending.... You've done it again.

Loved that ending!

I wondered when the romance was arriving. But I should have known not to be disappointed. All the things you do so well. Flora

Damn, girl. You write well. Your story moved along so well. I had an inkling how the ending would be, knowing how you write, but I wasn't quite sure.

Can't wait for more.

Your biggest fan...

LLB

Nellskitchen has a way with words and a knack for surprises as well. Well crafted with wry humor and excellent attention to detail. I was enthused enough to look her up and read another submission from the past titled "Whore" that was no disappointment. I recommend you do the same. Yup, there's something cooking in Nellskitchen!