by fronker
Not bad not bad at all, had all the points needed for a good story, and the dialogue worked well!!
JEG
Youre an amazing writer, i really got into that story, it wasnt like the words were just a tool for someone to express their dirty fantasies, its real, and awesome, dont stop now!!
Waiting for another hot entry! Hopefully where our lady gets brought down to earth... in the most degrading ways possible.
I know from my own experience that this story is very close to how a girl really becomes a whore. I loved it and I hope many more chapters will follow.
This could be the beginning of something exceptional. I almost get a sense of Parker, which is fairly max.
Your pacing is excellent – really gives a sense of Elizabeth's gradual degradation, her greed & ambivalence – desiring what horrifies her . . . please keep writing!!
great! This is one of the best whore-tastic stories ever written.
i have to say i like this story a LOT so far... sadly i have to stop reading for now. but i'll finish them up later very very yummy ;)
I really don’t think I’m reading the same story that everyone who’s declared this to be a great story , I just can’t see what’s meant to be erotic.
I know it's all fantasies, but GOD does it truly turn me on just thinking of being sexually used like that! 30 yo white redheaded 5'9" wife, 38DD-32-36 very under used sexually, constantly horny, sexually starved, unsatisfied and missing all the sex I'd experienced while in College. Needing desperately fucked hard, deep and often!
Love being with Black men, Black women, and Black couples and Black groups..
Orpheum69