by sudoenim
I think you're one of the only writers in the 'Gay' category that I read. And, this is another really good one!
Thanks, and keep it up.
Rich
Sooo good! Made me wish I was there. Looking forward to the continuation of this story. I know this is just your second submission to Literotica, but I've added you to my list of Favorite Authors.
Great cocksucking story.....Got me really hard...please keep stories like this coming..thanks!
love cocksucking and eating cum stories. my cum is all over me. hot story.
I'm at least predominantly heterosexual and not certain I could enjoy being in your main characters position but I know your characters immense pleasure thrilled me. Someone like me wouldn't enjoy your story if it wasn't as well written as it is. It is a simple but very effective story.
Despite that I still think your description could have been more vivid and your transition to the most exciting parts more sudden and intense.
You seem to have great potential. Keep up the good work.
I am sitting here stroking my cock as I read this wanting to do the same thing.
I remembered my first time in San Francisco. I had always been on the receiving end of blowjobs and one night I decided to be on the other end, the giving end. I was a little drunk but enjoyed every thrust as Steve filled my mouth with his cock and finally came. A little salty and bleachey but I enjoyed the taste and have continued to ever sinceUSA. Morkpurpur
Very interesting story I will admit..."Hot"!
Like to experience this fro myself...I'm a hetrosexual male.
I'm very hard right now having read this story...Curious about having a soft cock in my mouth then feeling it turn hard...
Pun intended, I'm a sucker for good massage stories, just as I am for good massages! This feels like a very real experience and the fulfilment of the narrator's desires is arousingly described - it reads like my own enjoyment of cock sucking masseurs through the years. Now for more of your stories...