All Comments on 'Why I Cheated'

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blackdove55blackdove55over 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Romance

Thank you for your comment. I did not know how to categorize it other wise. I wanted the love between Flora and sam to be the focal point.

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
Good Read****

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to your future submissions.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
I Know Why

You cheated because you're not a respectable man. You deserve to be alone.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 10 years ago
Oh dear. Some won't like this.

Far too real for them. Good story, though.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
DESERVE IT OR NOT

when in your OWN MIND thinking it was wrong, you defeat yourself, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
why did

you also write this snivel donkey dung

go away

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Life is sometimes messy

I read once that leaving your spouse and going to another were two independent questions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well I have several issues with this.

Romance? More like erotic couplings the way you ended it. Take note - a woman can have pantyhose on or she can have thigh high nylons on. But those are two completely different clothing items. If his ex-girlfriend really did put a beatdown on him, did he have her arrested and sent to jail for assault and battery? You do understand what a beatdown is don't you? (See previous for your lack of understanding on pantyhose and thigh hi's). If he deserves to be happy why not follow the love of his life to Brazil? That's the unfinished part of this non-romantic story. Not good. Not good at all.

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