All Comments on 'Why Should Priests Have All the Fun? Ch. 01'

better than most of the usual on here.a good effort,and a worthy read.You might wanna work on your transition,and ease into the sex part more.But,the dialogue isn't too bad,and it's a believeable scenario.Cheers to you,and waiting on part 2.

I Love the topic. Good story. Waiting for Part 2!

Good as far as it went, didm't go far enough.

great start but wheres the next part