by RedHotLadybug
I hope you'll revisit Britney and Josh at some point. The story moved along very nicely and now I'm REALLY curious about what was in that notebook of hers.
So, she's a spy. Got that. Still, much is left in the arena of unanswered questions. Diminishes the story, a bit.
What is with the notebook? I think she is an assassin, but who is she working for? You really need to continue this story!
Tell me there's more. I'm very intrigued and love the characters.
but so many unanswered questions. I hope we get to know more. Thanks for sharing!
That this isn't the ending... It's just a starter and was actually written in two parts, the first which I submitted early as a teaser.
So yes, I know how to write an ending, and no this isn't it.
Do people want questions answered? One- some stories are simply for pleasure, maybe this is one. Two- she's got a 10 chapter series so there's a good chance that there's more coming. Three - Red, I love your writing and can't wait for the next one whether it's this or SS.
Looking forward to the second part - this part was very well put together x
the 5 until we get some more of the meat of this story on the table. You are clever in witholding important data to keep our interest but don't wait to long to release the next segment.
Actually enjoyed this one even more than the other series, which has been a favorite of mine. You definately seem to be developing as a writer and get better with each release. Anyway, kudos and really looking forward to the next installment!
Pretty well written. And, of course, enjoyed the mystery/suspense.
;-)
Really would like to know a lot more about her.
You have the basis for quite a story.
Possibly an Epic.
TOK