All Comments on 'Wicked Weather'

by RedHotLadybug

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More

please say there is more to this.....

annanovaannanovaalmost 13 years ago
Anonymous has a point

I hope you'll revisit Britney and Josh at some point. The story moved along very nicely and now I'm REALLY curious about what was in that notebook of hers.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Okaaaayyy........

So, she's a spy. Got that. Still, much is left in the arena of unanswered questions. Diminishes the story, a bit.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 13 years ago
Curious

What is with the notebook? I think she is an assassin, but who is she working for? You really need to continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Please....

Tell me there's more. I'm very intrigued and love the characters.

feelinromanticfeelinromanticalmost 13 years ago
great story

but so many unanswered questions. I hope we get to know more. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Ending

Dois anyone know how to fenish and or end a story

RedHotLadybugRedHotLadybugalmost 13 years agoAuthor
Maybe I should say now

That this isn't the ending... It's just a starter and was actually written in two parts, the first which I submitted early as a teaser.

So yes, I know how to write an ending, and no this isn't it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Why

Do people want questions answered? One- some stories are simply for pleasure, maybe this is one. Two- she's got a 10 chapter series so there's a good chance that there's more coming. Three - Red, I love your writing and can't wait for the next one whether it's this or SS.

buzzlegirlbuzzlegirlalmost 13 years ago
Intriguing!

Looking forward to the second part - this part was very well put together x

papagrizpapagrizalmost 13 years ago
I'M GIVING YOU A 4 AND WITHOLDING

the 5 until we get some more of the meat of this story on the table. You are clever in witholding important data to keep our interest but don't wait to long to release the next segment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Even better

Actually enjoyed this one even more than the other series, which has been a favorite of mine. You definately seem to be developing as a writer and get better with each release. Anyway, kudos and really looking forward to the next installment!

mokkelkemokkelkealmost 13 years ago

i can't wait to read the conclusion, really intrigued by B

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Please keep them coming.

Pretty well written. And, of course, enjoyed the mystery/suspense.

;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Need to know

Really would like to know a lot more about her.

You have the basis for quite a story.

Possibly an Epic.

TOK

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