All Comments on 'Wife and I Get a Roommate Ch. 06'

by tonyl65

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
very hot story

I like the descriptive sec and bi-sex. Get an editor so that you clean up spelling and grammer

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 12 years ago
Terrific

Loved the strory and the action. But, yes, get an editor. I'd be willing to help with that. Let me know.

ballznall60ballznall60almost 12 years ago
Keeps getting better!

Loving this story and its bisexual theme. Can't wait for next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Interesting plot line

You have definitely given us an interesting plot line. Unfortunately the misspellings detract in that they draw attention away from your story. It is very hard to edit what you have just written. Try one of the volunteer editors. But please keep writing. You obviously have a talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Lucky Laura

I can't imagine what that day must have been like for Laura with soooooo many new and wonderful discoveries unfolding all at once - life certainly couldn't remain the same after this - loved it!!

partsman134partsman134about 10 years ago
Can't wait to read the next chapter

took a sneak peak at the next chapter

Looks hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I enjoyed this whole story. I liked that David and Tony were really into each other. Personally I would much rather have sex with a man than a woman. Your descriptions of the guys sucking and fucking each other was hot.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago

and a shopping we will go, let the girls eat on each other,

Iwanttotry7777Iwanttotry7777almost 3 years ago

Great series!!! If I was that young again.

1reddawg121reddawg12over 1 year ago

Hot,Hot,Hot🔥🔥🔥

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