by DG Hear
Anonymous Deserved, did you actually read the story? Jill went to their room with Dave, Jack went to the other hotel with Dave’s wife.
Good follow up. Raises hope for a good continuation after two lousy chapters.
4*
BJ
oh guys stop with the cliché of the imposing guy who is 6'6" and 280 lbs which scares everyone.
To believe that we have never participated in combat.
technique, experience, speed, endurance, strength make the difference during a fight.
Not the height and weight.
I agree with 1/10/19,she deserved what happened.Fancy wanting someone other than the first class husband she has.
Jill deserved what she got.She wanted sex with another man and was stupid enough to go with to another hotel away from her husband's protection,stupid cow.
Still entertaining.
I hope he is good to Joyce.
She is a victim in all of this.
While he is out getting his revenge, the husband of the woman HE and HIS WIFE raped is planning THEIR demise!
To Whoever wrote:
This is turning into a Rob Conner Story>
Thank You. I'm pleased that my name be associated with this fine author.
Not all men are wimp assed pussy's.
Good work!
Rob Conner
I'm looking forward to Chapter 5. Is the niggah going to rape/fuck him in the ass, or what?
This man wheather you like his life style or not, he is no wimp. He's out to get revenge for what a real wimp did to his wife. I'm behind him all the way. Waiting to see what kind of revenge is extrated.DG Hear, I love your stories. Your stories seem to have reality built in. Something I don't find in most stories. In your stories, every action has a reaction. Wheather I agree with your caracters or not, the stories are a fun read. Just thanks for writing your stories.An avid fan from the USA
and I can't wait until we can read about Joyce. She did not do anything wrong as far as I can see. Now, David is another matter. Just use and abuse him to no end. Make him see the eror of his ways.