by kantala24
I can't say this is my thing but I am happy that the husband is shown to care for her and doesn't just beat her. He engages her in conversation about her new 'duties'. He gets upset but not aggressivly angry.
This is a pleasent and welcome change that adds a touch of 'realisim' to the story that somehow in my opinion lacks it. - But that can be just me.
Carry on writing...
A really dumb story and a waste of time to write,let alone to read. How am I ever going to get that time spent on it,back?
If you want a slave and only to please yourself .go to a country that will accept you sick way of thinking. In the Arab states you can even beat her.
your story should be in NONCONSENT/RELUCTANCE. And your attitude towards women makes you a pig!
Good potential. Please carry on writing! This should have gone into BDSM, though. People not into domination or bondage will hate this story, but those of who like that stuff... Right category, right readers, more happy people!
And I called "My Wife's Surprise" crap. That was a master piece compared to this.
How her name is not Lorena I have no clue. Why she would have anything to do with this scumbag is beyond God himself.
As some have mentioned, this falls more under the heading of BDSM, but regardless it's well done. Most of the readers who follow this category would never treat or even think of treating their wives as the husband does, but regardless, it's interesting.
To those commentators who are offended by the story, please remember, it is just that, a piece of fiction. Don't get such a bug up your collective asses.
What kind of a sadist are you? Don't write anymore of this kind of crap, no one and I mean no one wants to waste time reading shit. That's what you are!
Loved this story. This is what a Man wants from his wife. Men would finally be happy
jesus fucking christ, so many idiots in the comments calling this dude a garbage husband and saying this is rape and sadism. You dumbasses have apparently never heard of bdsm
He is meant to look after her, he is an asshole.
I sse you never came back, just as well.
Scores 2/5