All Comments on 'Wifely Duties'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Incompensible

Short but confusing.

mickymouse113mickymouse113over 11 years ago
No Violence

I can't say this is my thing but I am happy that the husband is shown to care for her and doesn't just beat her. He engages her in conversation about her new 'duties'. He gets upset but not aggressivly angry.

This is a pleasent and welcome change that adds a touch of 'realisim' to the story that somehow in my opinion lacks it. - But that can be just me.

Carry on writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
HUH ?

A really dumb story and a waste of time to write,let alone to read. How am I ever going to get that time spent on it,back?

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
Pathetic male fantasy

clearly written by an inadequate husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A step ford wife..total his slave,one sick self centered story

If you want a slave and only to please yourself .go to a country that will accept you sick way of thinking. In the Arab states you can even beat her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

BDSM.

welderwonderwelderwonderover 11 years ago
Your story is in the wrong category!

your story should be in NONCONSENT/RELUCTANCE. And your attitude towards women makes you a pig!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
I liked it.

Good potential. Please carry on writing! This should have gone into BDSM, though. People not into domination or bondage will hate this story, but those of who like that stuff... Right category, right readers, more happy people!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
any dumber and

you would fall under the cathegory weed.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
WOW*

One of the worst on the site!!!!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
BDSM

Not NC/Reluct ... Pure BDSM

deadonedeadoneover 11 years ago
WOW

And I called "My Wife's Surprise" crap. That was a master piece compared to this.

How her name is not Lorena I have no clue. Why she would have anything to do with this scumbag is beyond God himself.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersover 11 years ago
Nicely done

As some have mentioned, this falls more under the heading of BDSM, but regardless it's well done. Most of the readers who follow this category would never treat or even think of treating their wives as the husband does, but regardless, it's interesting.

To those commentators who are offended by the story, please remember, it is just that, a piece of fiction. Don't get such a bug up your collective asses.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Total garbage!

What kind of a sadist are you? Don't write anymore of this kind of crap, no one and I mean no one wants to waste time reading shit. That's what you are!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Incompensible?

Did you mean Incomprehensible????

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
BDSM

This was pure Domination and submission.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent story

Loved this story. This is what a Man wants from his wife. Men would finally be happy

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

Loved this, my wife is the same way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Cucks go away please

jesus fucking christ, so many idiots in the comments calling this dude a garbage husband and saying this is rape and sadism. You dumbasses have apparently never heard of bdsm

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

He is meant to look after her, he is an asshole.

I sse you never came back, just as well.

Scores 2/5

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