All Comments on 'Wild Cats'

hot, erotic, sexy and deliciously yummy! xxx

Very interesting encounter and some great lovemaking. The ass fucking was the bomb.

simply loved it!!!!

Wish I were Eliza...and Beth's pussy and ass were close to my mouth.

there is just no way of getting around the images she spins for you. the scene leading to the bath was beautiful......

tommy

Powerful images and mindblowing sex. I hope you're published somewhere else more appreciative. One of the most well-constructed and literary stories I've read for a long time.

I loved your Story.

The attemntion to detail was amazing, and the detaisl of the strip, her reactions and the sex was lovely.

I also liked the way you finsihed the sex... with out lingering to much, I find at times I go into to much detail, and soemtimes letting the readers mind, imagination take over is more erotic.

Lovely, well done

M

Not quite my scene, but the artistry of the writing sucked me in further than Eliza's strap-on!

So glad that someone I've admired on the boards actually writes so well.

You really must make one of the meet-ups, Scheherazade - it would be amazing to meet you!

Eff

Should have read: "Awesome!"

Really loved the story, with it's slightly gothic/noir flavor and the delicious control the mysterious Eliza. Beth is a lucky lucky girl *^_^*

Hope to read more of your stories!

MooncatX

Written well but the storyline was not my taste.

my pussy was throbbing and gushing from reading this.

Lovely story. I could almost smell the sex. Beautifully realistic, passionate, and erotic.

The rise and fall of Beth's emotions was exquisite: fear, longing, desire, pain and lust. What made it even better was the knowledge she had... of the possibilities, and later, of the realities. And Eliza, omg, she was amazing.

Please keep writing.

This is an intriguing story. Your style of writing is descriptive and sexy. Loved it!