All Comments on 'Wild Sharon'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Ahhhhh

Excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
yawn

To stuffy and courigraphed. The condom was a downer.Needs to be more spontainious and more forplay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
dumb

this story was pretty dumb, she lets her hair down and changes into a red dress and all of a sudden she goes from unattractive to hot? and the sex was boring too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good work!

I rather liked the detail, and while some of the action might be telegraphed, I prefer to think of it as being foreshadowing. Anyway, this story was hot!

canid009canid009almost 8 years ago
Nice

Solid story. Well written and edited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
tips

why would your protagonist use a condom? its fiction, ignore speedlimits.

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

What a treat when you meet a woman that enjoys getting her rump rogered...!

tho my sweetie and I prefer mish...like seeing her beautiful face when she climaxes, frequently more than once, and if need be she can slip a hand between us to diddle her button

missed George slipping a rubber on...it was something I started doing to shorten the time my gf needed to sit on can to get rid of our fun-the quicker she's back in bed the better, and we usually stick a thick towel underneath us

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