by IvyMae
Welcome back to writing. For you, It seems like riding a bike. You did a nice job of teasing us with some character development, with room for more. This is the type of story that can stand on its own or develop into a series. Keep writing.
Your experience shows in this story. I found it drawing me in, the more I read, the more I wanted. Also it was a pleasant change from a lot of the other "slam bam..." stories. I am looking forward to your next story. Thank You!