All Comments on 'Wilderness Paradise Pt. 02'

Good read. Excellent writing but personally it coudl have used more S-E-X! I have read your other stories on Lush and you are very good. I am waiting for the next chapter. Hurry!

Where's part 1?

part 3 sooo needs to come out like right now!.. this is awsome and im totally hooked, please write fast..

End part 2?!?!?!?!?!?!!!! After not quite 2 pages?!?!?!?!!!!!!! After a 6 page part 1?!?!?!?!!!!!!! You are either very sadistic or an absolute genius! I mean you get a person all into the story and just when it starts to get exciting with what could be an awesome action sequence that could prove to be the catalyst for another incredible sex scene you stop!

Well done, very well done. I am hooked. Great story. Even better story telling!

Please take all the time you need to write the next part but hurry because I really want to see what happens next.

great story. really great story telling. am anxious to read more.

Excellent story telling so far!

i really enjoyed your story, please continue, as it is one of the best i read on here... thanks

Best ive seen write more pleeze!!

This was a great read but it was too damn short! I can't wait to read part 3 - glad I began this series. It's definitely one of the best. Thx, dude!

"adventitious ball" is quite a stretch, at least in the USA version of English.

they're soothing words, used to make the writer feel better. All in all still good work

Don't do it! Don't let "Paul Bunyon" nail the sister.