All Comments on 'Will's Surprise'

This was without a dought the hottest story I have read yet in here.... You are a very good writer and I am sure you are just as sexy as you write. Make no mistake older women make much better lovers.

Some older women, like my wife, are still hot and still love sex. Some willing women over 40,like my wife, still have good bodies and a wealth of sexual experience and love a strange cock once in awhile.I love seeing her get it and participating. She's great. She's also not a whore or slut or old hide or any other derogeratory name. She's been a wonderful wife for 35 years.

This is a very hot story and you should continue to write, but please get out a writer's handbook and check the rules for the use of commas. You use entirely too many. The alternative would be using an editor.

good at it gets..........well done

I love you writing. Keep going. Everyone would love a wife to share, even all the Annony"s

What a load of bullshit!

No man takes a woman's garter belt and stockings off. Only a faggot would do that, and only so he could wear the garter and stockings himself.

If you want to write erotica, do some research first. Then write about realistic situations not the crap that fills your infantile, pre-pubescent fantasies.