All Comments on 'Wimp'

keep writing! Your style is refreshing. Most stories in this genre lack personality-the narrator of the story has a breezy way with words.

If you write another story on this theme, slow it down some-have the narrator's frustration build. Give the wimp more chances to fail. And make the seducer a bit more interesting. I really liked your starting line "when you start going out..." I think having a narrator who did that throughout a story (letting you feel you were in on a conversation with her) would make a great read.

I don't think you can.

You are a wimp wannabe

A promise is a promise. Just because Angie's a slut, that doesn't mean Paul has to change who he is just to please her.