All Comments on 'Wings of Gray Ch. 03'

It was an ok chapter. I kinda missed the story though, I mean there was no story or character development in this chapter. I liked the way that you portrayed Alex's emotions though. Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers.

I like this chapter. I thought it was sweet that they had this time to make love and have some peace before having to deal with the trouble that you know is around the corner.

I liked this chapter but I have one request. I think that Alex should be given a break from hurts/miseries just because he has suffered enough from the camp..well, from his scars anyway. I mean, that's so horrible and it made me shiver and was thinking scary thoughts while I was reading that part. *shivers again* Yep, that's my request. Have Mike get beat up or something but NOT Alex. Ok..cool! :)

I think this story is coming along great and do appreciate that you're posting so quickly too. Great job! Cheers!! (:

Thanks for all of your comments and suggestions. I intentionally held off on the plot for this chapter just so our boys could have a moment alone together. The calm before the storm, right? I, AGAIN!, forgot to thank my editor at the beginng or end of the story and I feel like an ass haha. Thanks to my editor! Keeping me safe from "Did I spell everything correctly" Messages everywhere!

I liked this chapter, for once there was no outside drama and they just had a sweet blissful moment together

High School Romance submitted by Kitten2010 without the supernatural bent. Are you the same person?

its similar i agree, but the writing styles are a bit different. key similarities, but not sure they were written by the same author. this story is alot better an creative compared to highschool romance though. keep going!!! :)

To the people who asked if i was the same author as highschool romance,

No i'm not but I would not be surprised if my writing showed it. Kitten2010 is one of my favorite authors on here and I have those stories several times :) It seems most of my favorite authors also read my stories. After how many times I've read their stories I would be surprised a hint of it shows up in mine. Sorry if that bugs people I do try and be as original as possible

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where you take it!

Happy Writing :-)

Wow, I'm actually flattered to see these comments where people confuse us :) How cool is that!

good

It's a really cool I story. I love it, ill probably end up reading it again.