All Comments on 'Winning the Contract'

ONly a total slut would act that way, one with much experience committing adultry. Such an interesting way to tell your husband you have been fucking other men. I wont even get into the large number of health issues that the story brings up.

Ditto my comment regarding "South Bound Train".

This mently challanged writer belongs in a mental institute

Where is the loving wife here? seems to me it was a selfish wife,ok he got to fuck her while other men fucked her,and yes ok he got the contract but only so he can LET her fuck other men sounds like a good plan!

Husband should hang her in a tree and gut her filthy whoring ass with a very dull knife, while she is very much alive. Don't quit your day job.

There's nothing one can say that would help this writer make a better attempt next time. The only solution is for him to NEVER write and post another story on this website.

I can't believe the comments I've read so far about this "EROTIC STORY" It seems you people have taken this fantasy way too seriously.

I loved imagining the activities described in your story, your words painted a very clear picture for me to enjoy.

You're a good writer, please ignore the fools who are so naive, they actually believed the story to be true, lol.

As for me, I wish, lol.

Please keep up your great work.

readers are free to form ANY OPINION they want after they've finished a story. <p>

A STORY, yeah; no reader is going to believe this or any other stupid story they've labeled stupid or have rated extremely low, to be "real", as the idiot who said below. <p>

what many readers said, through their comments and ratings is: "This is a piece of gibberish nonsense." <p>

you are, of course, FREE to praise it as totally erotic, clever, or a masterpiece. but just because you are an idiot don't mean others, too, have to be... of course, it goes wihtout saying, the way to solve that wording dilemma is to say "I am THE SMARTEST reader here" and move on...

Was the wife a slut and the husband a cuckold or was the husband confused about what was happening to his wife? Is the wife going to continue being a slut? Will the husband grow a pair and kick her ass to the curb?

He should have said something? She ALSO could have said something! He was so low and with an apparent low self estem that I am surprised he even got a wife that looked hot.

Do an Epilogue, she gets to be a porn star and he gets to be a submissive widdow wimp and she has a hell of a good time.

well she took the wrong key card. she could have said NO right away and said who she was. he didn't tell them she was his wife. he could have stoped it all. but he let it happen. so lets have the next parts to the story and what happens to them now?. it made my pussy water as I dreamed it was me doing it with my mate joining in. yummmmmm

The whore didn't mind and the cuck was all for it.