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All Comments on 'Winter in the Mountains Ch. 07'

by ozland234

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NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
Great going!

I'm glad to see you continuing nicely with the story.

Please carry on!

John

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Stuff

Cant wait to hear the rest I got hooked on your Story:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent, realistic fantasy!

Nicely plotted, good character development. Ambitious--18 characters is a lot to make us care about, but we do.

Be careful with your apostrophes. They don't belong on plurals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WITM07

This story is excellent, but the editting is slipping.

Lukas

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