All Comments on 'Winter Nights'

They are a match of magic beings to warm each other through the long Norse winter. Per the agreement, Heidi will find her magic and be spared the passionless life her father chose for her.

I admire the throbbing rhythm of your prose.

to verbose and to descriptive. a little of the KISS rule is in order.

I don't think it was too descriptive. The way you tell it is what makes your story good and the movement of the prose is actually really impressive. You're a good writer and like a good writer you should write the way you want to write. You don't have to KISS if you don't want to.

The writing is so powerful that I can forgive you a few glitches. Thank you. Must read your other tales now.

brilliant. just brilliant. never thought of reading something of this quality on an erotica site.

do write more on this.