Wishes

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"Yeah, yeah you two are in love. Tell me something new for a change." She said to their shocked faces.

"Don't look at me like that. I saw this coming ages ago. Even before the wish thing. I just couldn't find a way for you two to see it." Melody explained. Connie and Simon looked at each other dumbfounded.

"So are you ok with this Mel?" Connie asked hesitantly.

"Ok with it? I think it's fantastic. Now we'll have to get you all moved out of your apartment and moved in here. And just wait til I tell everyone they are going to be so freaked. You can stay in Simon's room of course but we are going to have to make room for some of your stuff. This is going to be so much fun." Melody gushed.

"Looks like she's really thought about his." Connie said to Simon. "If you don't want me here I'll understand." She whispered. Simon captured her lips in a tender kiss. "There's no where else I'll have you be." He said seriously. "So now that's settled and you've worked out our lives Mel, is there anything else you'd like?" He said cheekily to his sister.

"No that'll do for now." She laughed. "Hang on. You have each other. Maybe I want a guy for me. Maybe I should track down that carnival and make another wish." She said excitedly.

"NO WAY!" Both Connie and Simon exclaimed as they all dissolved into laughter.

"Yeah maybe one wish was enough. I'm glad it worked out though." Melody said as she looked at the two people she loved most, thrilled that they were finally happy.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story

Romantic and hilarous! Loved It, keep up the good work.

PS: did the movie that inspired this story happen to be starring tom hanks?

luv_romanceluv_romanceover 13 years ago
well written

this is such a cliche story but it worked for me because it was so well written. very nice indeed!!! :) kudos. more stories please and don't you dare try to stop. no writer's block either. hehehehe. thanks.

1rndm11rndm1almost 14 years ago

The point of view from this is so interesting and so different! Usually with stories like this, it gets confusing. But this one is so well written!

angelx602angelx602about 14 years ago
loved the story

I don't think I've read a more romantic body switching story than this one. I really liked the characters. Great job.

Wolf_girl13Wolf_girl13about 14 years ago
Good story

it was very well written, and the character development was great. intersting take on the body switching. keep up the good work :)

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