All Comments on 'Witchfall'

Well done!!!

Lots and lots of tits. And magic sex. And debauchery. Cheerio good writer.

I really enjoyed it. My favorite moment was the spider transformation. I much prefer it to the possession that lacks personnality.

With a transformation you get to see how the girl changed. It's still her but revealed, twisted, and sexier.

Great job on this story.

No stories quite like those of Kingmaker.

I'm not usually posting any comments but this time I had to.

Your stories are really well done and mixing plot efortlessly with eroticism.

The corruption/transformation theme is also vey nice and something I'm really glad to see in your stories. It's sorely lacking compared to other themes.

I just found your stories thanks to HoC's website.

They're without a doubt my favorite ones out there. I love both the one-shots and the ones that take place in a bigger universe.

I don't wish to rush you by asking for a new story soon.

Just know that you have one more enthusiast reader.

Ah Morgana, we knew thee well. But of course, nothing's that easy - it's just so satisfying to see the bad guy (read:gal) get the last laugh.

This whole series is fantastic, if a little difficult to chase around your profile. I finally found the chronology on your bio, but it would definitely be easier if ya stuck them all in a series of sorts. You handle your corruption/transformation scenes really well and the balance of power between genders is surprisingly even considering the dominance elements to the story, which is disappointingly rare - nice job. Love the kinky absorption/rejuvenation by absorbing innocence too; equal parts dark and arousing, which is perfect for Morgana.

Any chance we'll be seeing more from this universe soon? It'd be great to see Morgana's revival and re-domination of the world, and there's still the spider queen and demon lady to follow up on too...

If not, this series was a great read - thanks for the effort!

OtherwiseUnkown

More apt for erotic horror.