All Comments on 'With Love, Aunt Zelda'

Throughly enjoyed your well written story.

You start off as Harold and then Hal then turn to Lee? Story was good regardless but that was a bit confusing is all

One more chapter but it could turn into a series.

what happens when older bro finds out. if you keep going do not bring him into this and turn her into a slut aunt.

Nice Story, Zelda is a strange woman - her eyes changed colour from a grey to brown.

Enjoyed it, please continue.

Len

Was a very sensual story, could feel the love. Now my hope is they explore all aspects of sexuality in deep detail please!

How did she get custody of a 10 year old and a 13 year old when when was only 14?

Your story line is very good, but all the inconsistencies mentioned in other comments, plus others, detract from the story's value. You mention the house and garden, then you say she has enough to pay the rent. Is she renting a house?

You should use an editor to help maximize reader enjoyment of your work. I am listed both in Literotica and Stories on Line and am always willing to help make a good story better.

please!

When did Hal become Lee? OK, don't sweat the small stuff! Good story other than the eyes, ages, names and whatever.

Ithink for all concerned you had better add another chapter.If you don't ,I know where you are. Great story just keep at it .

I for one hope there is more. Good story. Thanks.

YES

Yes I Liked it !

That was a supremely erotic story quite up to the couple I have alreadt read and enjoyed.

As you may gather, I agree with the other commenters and would love some of this quality.

Yes, please do!

Let's not sweat the small incoherent details you made. But its best if you finish this with a happy ending. This looks like a story that can keep going as long as you get your coherence right.

Thia ia a great start to a wonderful story. Please More More .

More.... please