All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 09'

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FantasticFantasiesFantasticFantasiesalmost 13 years ago
The Reason

the reason I like this story so much is the unpredictable nature of it, while the story progresses in a logical, natural (at least as natural as nonhuman fiction can get) way.

Do keep up the good work. I'm very curious as to who Tempest would wind up with. I really like both Thatcher and Talon. Personally, I think it would be absolutely unfair and heart-breaking if Thatcher were to die or if he were to lose his beloved all over again. On the other hand, Talon deserves to be happy too.

Good luck resolving this issue. I'm VERY interested to see your solution to this dilemma.

mokkelkemokkelkealmost 13 years ago

this was well worth the wait. i'm glad to hear Talon is OK and their bond is "reforming". just wonder where that is gonna leave Tatcher. maybe she can have them both ;-) who knows. it's wonderland after all

MadamButtaflyMadamButtaflyalmost 13 years ago
***** Perfect

...and well worth the wait. Looking forward to your next update.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
puhlease

i agree with mokelke idea for i dont want both Talon nor Thatcher brokenhearted - n

Nulli_Para_OraNulli_Para_Oraalmost 13 years ago
Whoa!

Your story is a feast for the eyes and the senses. I enjoy the pacing, the characters, the tension, the emotions, everything. I'm looking forward to your next installment. :)

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