Wonderland Ch. 14

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"Tempest," he groaned loudly, his thighs stumbling in their tempo as my teeth sank into the soft skin of his neck, deeper and deeper still until something warm and thick and intoxicatingly sweet filled my mouth.

"Drink," he commanded huskily in a voice not entirely human. "Take what you need, Tze'san."

Something about that name shook me to the core and I tightened my hold on him, never wanting to let him go...and I never wanted him to let go of me in return.

"Yes, Tze'san," Talon moaned softly as I drank, his bruising thrusts careening out of control. "Yes...YES!"

I pulled my fangs from his neck after I felt him come inside me again, his wordless cry of pleasure soothing the possessive beast that had risen to the surface. His bite throbbed in time with the ache in between my legs, but I didn't care. I was sated and so was the need inside of me...for now.

Spent, Talon slowly lowered his body down to his elbows, his breath hot and ragged against my collarbone. Wordlessly, his limbs intertwined with mine and locked us into place, making it clear that I was to remain beneath him...not like I minded. I gently stroked his body with my hands and fingertips as we came down from our high, needing the closeness -- and time to catch my breath.

"Tze'san," I whispered quietly against his damp neck a long time later. "What does it mean?"

Talon lifted his head so our eyes could meet. I smiled as I saw the beast fighting the man to respond. The intense look didn't scare me anymore, not like it used to. Instead, it made me smile.

"Tze'san is the name of my mate," Talon said huskily as I stroked over the hard lines and planes of his face. I paused at that and watched the magic in his eyes turn them into a molten silver pitch. Emotions flooded his face -- and me -- as he drew himself even closer.

"It's you."

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Boo! She should've been with Thatcher. They are both disliked hybrids.

TalesofaMermaidsTalesofaMermaidsalmost 7 years ago
A very Twilight ending

Why Talon? Why not thatcher?! And why can't we have the end!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

What happen with Thatcher? He wake up? His lost parts of his body regrow?

What it is his end?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Very well written! I was enthralled by the story! I am hoping that this is not the end. I will be looking for more chapters in the story. Thank you for writing this! Absolutely fantastic!!!!

izzieDizzieDalmost 8 years ago
A MOST RIVETING TALE!!!!

Absolutely Marvelous!!!

Stumbled upon this by checking out the similars list and SO glad I did!

This story has been spellbinding! The twists and turns leaves one on the edge of the seat! I refused to stop to comment until I'd ingested the very last word! *grins*.....

There is so much more to be told here and I simply cannot wait!

Thank you ever so much for sharing your gift.

Respectfully Enthused,

Izzie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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NOOOOOO!!!! This can't be the end of it. Please continue! What happened with thatcher and the rest of the clan? Good god I was hoping for thatcher and tempest to end up together. I am thoroughly saddened that they didn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOVED IT

I hope you'll be adding more to Talon and Tempest's story :)

crp92crp92over 8 years ago

Please add more!!!!! I loved every part of Tempest's story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
omg

I can't wait for the new one...im addicted..

srcollinssrcollinsabout 11 years ago
Good Work

I enjoyed this series. You told a story in a story in a story and yet somehow managed to settle all of the stories in the end. Thank you for sharing.

trubblemakurtrubblemakurover 11 years ago
Torn

I gotta say I fell in love with Thatcher and Talon.I feel bad for Thatcher. I am curious as to what happened to all of Conner's group if they were all killed you really didn't specify. Having introduced the characters to us with some bit of depth to not expand on the fight scene to know what happened to everyone kind of made me feel like something was missing. However I am not going to tell you how to write this story. Maybe we learn more later as this appears to not be finished yet, So I am waiting for the rest of this wild ride you are taking us on. Kudos for a job well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
loved the ending!!!!!

I was a fan of talon since the beginning and was glad that they go back together.you did a great job with this story. It took a long time for them to mate but the sex scene was worth it.

ladybug71ladybug71almost 12 years ago
Thank you....

for writing such an AMAZING story!! I can't wait to read it to the very last word!! Please try not to make us wait as long....please....thank you!!

GerrivGerrivalmost 12 years ago
Wait what ....

Ok dear I see you've been taking cliffhanger lessons from someone! I loved the story and I hope there's more good job la

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Need more please!

Please continue with Talon & Tempests love story. I really believed that you were going to let Thatcher take Tempest away from Talin. I want to see what type of powers Talon has now that his magic has been restored ten fold from stayi g dormant for so long. I thought the sex scene was sooooooo hot I was sweating and breathing really hard. Considering the sexual tension that has bei g building up I was happy to wait 16 chapters before we got one. But now that we have experianced your writ g skills and they way to draw the readers into experianced the scene you are trying to portray we need more. We need more sex, and complicated love, war scenarios. I hope tempest falls pregnant soo with a rare and powerful chil/ children maybe twins. I hope it is not a girl straight away as that will make it too easy fit Thatcher to think it was right to play with Tempests heart and feelings. I would like Talin and Tempest to have a son if not than twins as their first children to make it interesting. We can't have Thatcher getting everything he wants straight away. But it makes for a good read. Please do not keep us waiting need the next installments to this story an soon.

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