All Comments on 'Wood Spirit - 1814 Ch. 01'

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pouncingtigresspouncingtigressalmost 17 years ago
wary

Good writing as always, but I sure hope that this time the girl won't be left bleeding to death on the floor at the end of the story! Major bummer in the previous story. So for now it's only 50 %. But I'm still curious where it will go this time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Okay...I'm trying to bear the character buildup.....

....and I appreciate the history of living, bathing, cooking in 1814 in the woods, but some great sex better be somewhere in this story...and often.

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