All Comments on 'Wooded Cabin'

Story is good, has a lot of potential. I hate to be a backseat editor but a couple of times when the story changed scenes it seemed to be a little too abrupt. other than that I enjoyed the tale. Thanks! Andrew

I loved it. Until they meet it is told as a set of parallel events. It seems quite easy to follow for me.

I think you have a very interesting style of writing, quite apart from the content. As for the content, your writing makes an improbable situation seem completely plausible. Oh, and it's quite hot too.

WELL I LOVED THIS STORY AND I KNOW FOR SURE THERE ARE TWO LOVERS OUT THERE DOING THE SAME THING RIGHT NOW ,I LIKED THE WAY YOU BROUGHT THEM TOGETHER THAT WAS JUST GREAT,NOW I GIVE YOU A 5 STARS PLUS NICE STORY I LOVE READING STORYS LIKE THIS.........................R......................