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by AimTwoPlease
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Anonymousabout 12 years agoLess is more
People who leave no profile should not be permitted to post. I read profiles first. Thus, your attempt at erotic lit
disinterested me.
Roald
Torinonaover 9 years agoSome of your descriptions are so spot-on...
...when I read the words "my inward strokes produced that clickety-clack sound of wetness"... I knew instantly the sound you were describing. There's nothing else that sounds quite like it.
You write a very playful and erotic story, I enjoy that mix very much.
ElectricBlueover 9 years agoanons who criticise a new writer coz there is no profile? Go back under your rock
Liked this bit of writing, and yes, the clickety clack comment is spot on! Nice one.
rightbankalmost 9 years agoRoald, you are a hypocrite
you complain because the author does not have a detailed profile, but you post your complaint as anonymous?
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