All Comments on 'Words on Skin'

I personally thought IMU was INU for I Need You.... this was fantastic, please write a follow up, I would love to see how she gets past mom and the wedding called off. I would love to see how they handle living together and loving and maybe a child.... what do you say.... i know a lot of your readers would agree, a final long chapter would be great...

Though I don't prefer incest, but the wonderful and mature way in which you handled it makes it very believable. I am a fan of yours after this story.

I'm not into incest, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was very believable. I'd love to know if there is a sequel.......

Thankyou

Great story. I figured out it was a heart the second time she wrote it and realized Chip didn't exist almost immediately. I also suspected she was lying about her "first" anal with the guy who forced her dry hole, and the confirmation of that was implied when she said Chip would be her first. However, I was surprised when my suspicion that she was actually a total virgin--because of her desire for Scooter to be first in everything--proved most likely false. (She never explicitly stated that she had lied about that as well, and I think she would have in the big confession scene if her cherry had actually been lost to a vibrator/hairbrush/horseback riding/etc., so I didn't figure everything out in advance.

While I agree with previous commenters that I would love to read more about Scooter and Lizzie, I can understand why you have not taken up that call. It would be very difficult to maintain the same tone as the ramifications of their taboo relationship have to be dealt with. Leaving them on the warm and fuzzy declaration of their love allows the audience to imagine a happily ever after even if it would be extremely challenging to write such a path for their life and remain as believable as this story was.

And let's face it; the reason happily ever after is used at the end of stories is, if it is actually true, there generally isn't much more going on to write a sequel about. It's why sequels always introduce new problems. One of my favorite examples being Karate Kid--main character goes through everything he did to win the girl only to have the opening of the second movie destroy that relationship so he can put his actual life on the line to win a different girl.

not only did this one go in my favorite file here, but also went into my hard copy file. when my fiancée and I get a little board with our sex life, (which with a 24 year old smoking hot blond isn't easy) we like to role play using the stories as scrips! Lucky for me this is one of my fiancée favorite things to do. This story is now her favorite, and I really love it too. My fiancée even gave a copy to my mother and she fell in love with it too. My mother is pretty strict I wouldn't be one, to think my mother enjoys reading incest erotica. Anyway I would love to see a sequel or maybe even just an epilogue, let the reader know what Lizzie told her mother about Chip, and then what happen with Lizzie and Scooter and if they decided to stay together and what they told there mother. Anyway enough of all that probably the best writing I have seen on this sight please keep up the good work and thank you from Daniel and Molly

That was so cool,I'm not much into spelling.Very erotic and exotic

Oh my god, yes, so fucking good! Beautiful! I didn't figure out what imu meant until it was revealed at the end of the story.

I secretly want to fuck my older sister in the ass. I'm so hard right now thinking of the tight dress that caresseed her plump ass and large, bouncy c-cup's the other day. Mmmmmh! Oh-my-my!

I for the past few years been ghost reading and made an account so I could favorite this story. This story was masterfully written and laid out. As far as imu went, I never guessed it. Once again, beautifully written. Cheers.

I've just realised that I have had this stored as a favourite for years without a comment. It is brilliant

This is so well written. I almost didn't start it because you said it was long. I found it to be the perfect length, and refused to stop reading no matter how long. Thank you for this.

This story is one peace of masterwork and makes me wish to trades places with richard so badly i cant even think clearly about it

What a wonderful story! I usually don't read many of the long stories, I will give it a try, but very few are this well written. I found it interesting and I loved the banter between the two. Richard was especially witty & charming. If you have been lucky enough to find that in a man, you have hit the jackpot. Thanks so much for the story. You really have a nice touch. BTW, the closest I came to IMU was, I'll marry U. Please refrain from mocking. Keep up the good work!!!.😂

This was a well written story. Loved it! Please continue. Not only sensual but held my interest! Gracias!!

Loved it, did find it long but it was so good that i refused to let the length deter me haha. And i kept guessing 'imu' to mean 'i marry u' hehe. close enough :P

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That was the best storie I've heard for a very long time and it was a really exciting chase oh my god did i get a huge hard on for this

No wonder this is one of the top rated stories. I enjoyed it even more the second time around.

A true love story. Thank you so much.

What a great story , write a second part !!

The plot is great and the naration even better. The best one I had so far. The IMU ending is perfect along with the BAWOO.

Everytime she wrote it, I was thinking it meant.. I'll marry u from her to him. Since I was thinking this from the beginning when she said she had a fiance....I was pretty sure she wasn't telling the truth. This was a very erotic story indeed. Thank you Ienjoyed this read.

Add far as the title of my comment....well although I would have enjoyed having a brother or sister to hang out with growing up. I think if I had a sister, I would have been her first.

I love going to the beach. I fell in love with oldest sister at the beach. I still love her and always will. I am her baby brother.

This is a great story, well written. Why not add more to it. Please, thank you for sharing it with us.

You did everything right when you created "Words on Skin". Richard/Scooter's narration, his characterization as "the smartest dumb guy" by Lizzie, Lizzie's characterization as the relentless runner "Li'l Dingo," who never gave up, the very realistic interactions between them, Lizzie's fictitious fiance. and, of course, the "imu" puzzle were all brilliantly done. Thank you, PacoFear!

I thought imu meant I make u sins she always said it right before breakfast XD

This is a great story.. Loved it from the beginning... I figured out "IMU" right away... Can't wait for more from you...

Surprised by the way there was no Chip. Giving you a big 5 STARS for such a perfectly great story of incest with a huge love between siblings.

I'm new to Literotica and this is the first story I've read. Wow, what a way to begin!

The author is gifted. Long may you continue to write.

I read this a number of years ago and it's been with me ever since. I still remembered it as a wonderful experience and finally just had to search for it again. Amazing writing.

The story was heartwarming and sensual.

I just wanted this to go on and on. Real characters with real emotions and a page turning story. I didn't get the "IMU" until the end though. Another author on the favourites list!

Dave

The story had a feeling of constantly rolling like a wave. Slowly at first and then growing as the tension mounted. She needed him so bad thought she was going to crash, but the top kept rolling until the crescendo on the beach. Fabulous read kept me interested all the way through.

Plz bb

I've read this story over and over.The love and affection feels real,The sex,while almost completely mindblowing,was secondary to the emotional content. Bawoo, indeed.Best erotic story I've ever read.Thank you.

i got a note back in Junior high that had the letters IMU on it with some creases in the paper. when i creased them and brought them together the page fanned and the message read I "heart" U. Thank you for bringing this memory back to me, i enjoyed the story and will be reading more of yours thank you again

Not trying to preach here... I do some writing too. Even though I have never put it out on any web site, sometimes they are like this but not incest, Just love making or sex. The reason I say this is as a fellow writer I enjoy a good story. Not one that just starts off with people screwing. Even though for me at least the story was pretty transparent. Why maybe because I wish had someone to love me like this. I understood by the second IMU that is was I love you. I also, and not because I am reading this in a incest catagory I figured out the desire of Liz pretty quick, not because it was transparent but because I understood her feelings. You got a great knack for getting across feelings, and desires. It is a well written story. It had emotion and flow. Both main characters are well written. Well though out. I am no good at critiquing in the details but I know a good story when I read one. Thanks,

There should definately B a 6 after the 5. It was a wonderfully written tale and very enjoyable for a 79 year old man. Not only was there gentile sex but so much love.

Very good story. A slow and passionate by Lizzie to Richard seduction. The men got used to be very blind to the feelings of women, we do not notice things until the end of the road. Obviously, I played IMU as I Love You, although I did not imagine the heart in the word. I also noticed that Chip was an invention of Lizzie, to awaken Richard's love for her.

It would be interesting that the author wrote a sequel to this story, to know what life holds for them.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

I kept seeing this story turn up in the suggestion box and resisted but finally said "What the hell, why not?" I'm glad I did. Forget being erotica, this is a five star STORY that had me eager to keep reading. The fact that it was super hot and extra naughty was like a bonus.

I sort of decided Chip might not be real, but I didn't dwell too much on "imu" as I read, figuring it would be explained. OK, I admit it - I cried when it was. That was one of the most touching scenes I can remember in ANY kind of erotica, porn, whatever. Seriously, thank you, wherever you are.

Great story

You are showing a lack of movie buff cred when you manage to misspell padawan as paduan

She should have said i"m not on the pill either.or wrote it on his back after his last cum in her !

Like one of the other commenter wrote, I, too, love stories where the hot sex is set in the context of a loving relationship. Great job! And thanks for taking the time to create this. Peace.

So, I finally read it and normally I'm just looking for a thrill but this story drew me in and wouldn't let go. It finishing the story left me with a warm fuzzy lovey feeling like nothing I've read on here before. If asked I would completely suggest you could be the best author on here and have a serious chance at a professional cover.

Few notes

IMU- dang, totally missed it... I was trying to break it like some code lol maybe I'm a pretty dumb smart guy.

Padawan ... as a star wars fan I'll leave it at that with a laugh and a nudge.

I would love to read another installment of this and see how their life carries on together. Or maybe not as I have it playing out in my head already lol.

Thank you so much for sharing your creativity and artistry with us.

Loved this storry, it was the best got me going,ooooo yes.

Good character development. No I didn't figure out what IUM was, but then I'm a guy. Story had a good balance of story and sex.I hope you continue writing.

I got an early pre-teen start on erotic stories and even through 44 years of marriage stories of this quality were far more satisfying; an excellent satisfaction maker.

I loved reading it I hope to read more soon

Today is the second time I read this one, and it's even better than the first time.

Voted 5 Stars after my first read, and I'd double it if I could.

Easily my favorite story, and I just don't see that changing.

Thanks, and keep writing!

I liked the story very much, well written, though I felt it could have had an epilogue. What happened afterwards?

holy shit. this must be the best fuckin' incest story ever written. no the best stry ever written on literotica. bruh. seriously. IMUUUUU HOLY FUCK THAT DESTROYED ME. IM DEAD BRO I CANT ANYMORE. gah. everything about this story is lit as fucccckkkkkkkk

Wow. This is one well crafted story. 5 stars.

I figured out what imu meant the first time she wrote it. Very good story!

I got that right off the bat. My first gf and i had used the same skin writing thing and i did imu first. And ooddly enough it took her a while before she got it. Not as long as rich but it wasn't on her first try. Also, long time luker, first time commenting on any story on the site, one of the best i've read in a long time!

I throughly enjoyed this story, of a long chase to find her true love. I would like for you to write another book it with the same characters.maybe have them get married and have kids.B

Wonderful, i loved every word of this story.. More please!!

Great story. Too bad you haven't written anything on here for the better part of a decade. This site is poorer for that. This story cries out for a follow-up.

I cannot deny that I have enjoyed reading the story very much,especially the latter part.The part when she lets go of all her affections she had held for him followed such warmth in me as much that if I were sitting on an iceberg it would have melted right under me.The words with which you described her triumph are certainly the most impressive and unsurpassable in that sense.And upon a thought contrary to several others,I would have actually preferred it had the story been longer.Still, sir, admired your works very much,more on the emotional aspect than the rest of it.You certainly made my day.This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com signing off.Thank you

Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......

"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".

All meant in good humour.

Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.

ruchirsaini@yahoo.com

Thank you

Sir,it is the highest degree of truth that you need not bother with any thoughts upon a sequel.It is better to leave the while it can sustain its perfection.This is what I've sincerely stated or attempted the same to Sir mentalcase and Sir Jammyjimmy.......

"You either die a hero or write long enough to see yourself become the villain".

All meant in good humour.

Perhaps it may serve my original purpose,as stated, had it not been taken care of previously.

ruchirsaini@yahoo.com

Thank you

I cried a little ti see that she had loved him for so long. It was beautiful:0)

If only Hallmark movies were this Hot, or porn left us happy crying. That would be awesome. An Indie film adaptation of this story would do very well IMHO.

Have to be honest here. Wish I found this seven and a quarter years ago. Both astounded and in awe. If you're not already an author in the "makes books for money" sense then please do something about it because you should be getting paid. If I wasn't broke as heck I would be demanding a way to give you money for what I just read. While some things suchas chip not being real were obvious from the getgo I went completely the wrong way with imu (thinking "i'd marry you" but being dubious as to the age of those kind of thoughts) and the story itself was truely amazing. If it were friendship rather than incest this would be ready for a movie rather than straight pornographic literature. As it stands it is still on the verge of both alienating and enthralling readers. The fact that you added a forewarning just means that people clearly know what they are getting into, and for that alone I commend you. But the story? Unforgettable. In a very good way.

PS - Don't ever make a sequel unless you can't sleep without writing it, because it just doesn't need one.

Awesome story! One of the best i have ever read.

I cannot believe how amazing that was! I fucking bow down to you. I wish I wouldn't have read that, only so that I could read it a thousand more times! Great work, you need to get that all over every internet page there is, or publish it or some shit. Amazing. I absolutely love it. Very detailed too. Great work.

... and still as good as the first time.

Love this one.

I did not guess it. Never came close, my thought :"I'm yOurs" and then realized the "yOurs" started with a y. Also "I AM OURS". Couple of questions...Was she a virgin and hide this some way from Scooter? He said she was very tight and felt like she had not been fucked and stretched. She mentioned a "frat" guy pushed his cock part way up her "pooper". Was that part of her fibs. Hope you reply.

I was so enthralled I read again to make sure I understood. I wish you received these comments and could reply. I have a few questions. Was there EVER a Chip? Was Chip the first guy, but she knew no one could replace her brother? I loved the few clues in the story. 1) Why was she so tight? Wasn't Chip fucking her enough to stretch her out? 2) The fingering on the deck. A little surprised that this happened so soon. Loved the story. MY FAVORITE.

My email if possible.prop69@yahoo.com. Why aren't you still writing.

I reread this for the second time... Today... And I still sang the last 4 lines of the author's postscript after he signed it... Gah... He got me too darn good.

Loved the story very hot. I didn't catch it either till the end but thought few time was marry not a heart. Good one.

I figured it the 1st time you wrote it !

It's not your fault at all ; I tend to make my friends angry each time we watch a new movie together, to the point they ordered me to "shut up your big mouth, okay, Fred ?"

Anyhow, I loved your story... it's just... I'm a little on the sensible side so, if you could stop making me cry ?! (please, don't stop the hard-ons coming, on the other hand !)

Oh, just so you know : "fiancée", like you expell it is for the females. It's "fiancé" for the males, although I apreciate that you try to use some words of my country !

I apologize for giving you lessons in french, although I can't use YOUR language correctly !

The 5 stars I gave you are totally for the quality of your story !

I also foresaw the non-existence of Chip, by the way !

I told you I'm uncurable !

I want to read more about how Richard and Elizabeth continue their lives. How have they balanced things in, say, 5 years?

Continue the story please.

made me cum

Yeah, I figured it out pretty quick, I'm a guy too. That doesn't matter, your explanation was right on. Your story had great pacing, excellent description of the sex, and very nice transition to and from the sex. It was both hot and touching, thank you.

All the feelings between siblings and that final sharing - so much here and well written! Certainly captured in print all that really happens in a 'close' family! What you for sharing! PERFECT!

I figured it out pretty quickly and thought it was so funny and cute.

It was amazing I was intrigued a lot in the story wondering if the mum was going to find out. And amazed at the fact that imu meant I <3 u I mean just the best story ever, Like write a book on this haha.

The best incest story I've read so far ,loved the anal descriptiveness ,I came soo hard ,brilliant !!

I remember reading this one, and am glad I found it again. One of my faves.

First time I read an erotic story, assuming it was written for that, written so well it seemed like literature, closer to Nabakov than to other erotic stories that mainly seem like porn. I don't know how you do it, but then, I'm not that kind of author. I just hope you do it more.

This is by far the best story i have ever read here! Proof = this is my first comment.

Great work! You have my sincerest compliments. Thanks!

Chip should be real, but actually be lesbian and a chick. Threesomes rock!

I found this story a few years back. It is still probably my favorite family love story of all. Love it!

Likewise, this is a favourite of mine. I keep rereading your stories and have been doing so for some years now. I love how warm and loving they are - especially this one.

This is one amongst my favourites, Stolen Kisses by this author is also a really great story. The only part of this story that disappointed me was that Lizzie, despite being in love with Richard since she was 14, and as she is not a virgin and has experience at giving a BJ she has obviously gone out and fucked and sucked other boys before finally declaring her love for Richard. Somehow it doesn't ring true that over the years she would write 'imu' on his skin at every opportunity and then pop out and have sex with someone else. If she had only recently become aware of her love for her brother that would be different.

You had me hooked with the first Bawoo! A beautifully imagined story, told by somebody with a clear affinity with their protagonists and a genuine flair for writing. It can be a bit of a trek to find a story as good as this, but the chase is always worth it. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to read the rest of your stories. Oh, before I go, if you wanted to maybe write some more tales of these two, well, that'd be nice. Thanks for sharing your work.

Dude this was a freaking hell amazing stories.....but I was thing if chip isn't real then she should have been given her virginity to Richard but most of all amazing stories

Normally I get tired with the long story (more than 3 ch). This was worth it, as each one extended the story line excitingly as a lead in to the finality. This was great, looking forward to more of your stories.

It took me a little to figure out Imu, but I tried thinking like a teenage girl and came up with the m = ❤️. Before I got into ch 02, confirmed my guess with a teen at the grocery store. She laughed & told me yes right away.

Yes, ho yes, slowly gets you your just rewards.

I found more to this story then a girl loosing here virginaty.

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There was a degree of sensitivity that was so well literary portrayed that gave it a serious sense of realism. It

But I have to agree with animous I wished she had given her cherry to

Richie. But I still thought it was a great story. I hope you will be writing more.

One of the best stories on lit.

Ok but who did she give her cherry to??

That was probably one of the best stories I have ever read on here. Truly a work of art.

Legit, one of the best stories I've ever read. Absolutely fantastic. Keep it up!

She gave her cherry to Scooter too. Reread when they were on the porch and he "wet" himself in her. He realized she was very tight. Nothing was said, but he knew something was up. My only comment is that anyone that has had sex on the beach knows that no matter how careful, the sand is going to get into places you don't want it. It doesn't feel good!

Admittedly, I just skimmed over the first few pages, but I will probably read the whole thing at some later date. I say that because in the instances that I read her drawing IMU, it was followed by whatever breakfast she made, so I thought it was short for I Made You (insert breakfast food).

In that one instance that it was followed by something that did not fit, I figured my guess was wrong. :)

Figured out the imu as soon as i saw it but still very much enjoyed the story. Lots of subtle threads woven into the story that were fun to follow.

.... so I didn't work out the IMU.

However it was worth having to read the whole excellent story to find out.