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by billy_strokes

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imsmilingnowimsmilingnowover 19 years ago
Everything a girl wants...

Oh Billy I loved everything about your story! It was so hot! Keep writing them and I'll certainly keep enjoying myself-I mean enjoying reading them. ;-)

Colin PearceColin Pearceover 18 years ago
Imagination workin overtime too

A fun story with a good, strong female character. Thanx

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Constructive, I Hope

Not that the story was bad, but I really don't like stories written as "you did this or that" or "then you said" etc. Pick a character and stay with it.

You show promise.

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