by PamCarolson
Enjoy this type of story. Sorry I didn't enjoy it at all. but then it's your fantasy and your story. I assume in the absence away from this site you have had more experiences with your lovers. I am equally sure you will tell us about it. I am sure you will turn a lot of swingers and married couples with open marriages on. But for sad boring old farts like me you do nothing for me. Good luck with yours stories and good luck with writing and your lifestyle. But I won't be part of it.
I loved it!!!! The slow start worked for me, but it would have been even better with some edit. More, please.
Great story. Brought back some memories of how we became intimate with each other. Kay and Steve
BUT HOW ABOUT SOME EDITING TO MAKE IT MORE ENJOYABLE
The criticsism is meant to be constructive, I am sure! Just carry on writing please...
You are showing definite progress. Each story better than the last. Keep 'em coming.
Hi Pam im Terry again the 67 mwm from ohio, wow love this story and how far you both got and the teasing and questions along got me hard thanks love to know how you endthe fling and or just how far you guys go to including a threesome with his wife or you get hubby and your new partner
any ways let me know what is going on? love your picture on the literotica site
kisses hugs and hot grabass
Terry
This story aroused me no end. Pity I was sitting alone - just had to masturbate myself for some satisfaction! Hope there is more to follow.
Nice story. Like the slow buildup. Keep writing, you show some real talent.
I think that Nicole should take more advantage of her dominant role with Jeff, as he willingly submits to her suggestions and commands, I would like to see her going deeper with her control over him, and eventually his wife, and Nicole's husband, who must be a unknowing voyeur.