All Comments on 'Workout Ride'

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Tarheels_FanTarheels_Fanover 10 years ago
Another great story

Completely enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You lost me at "He's oriental."

That's a term that stopped being acceptable several decades ago and it took me out of the moment entirely. Suspension of disbelief became impossible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Oh he'll yeah....your story sounds like the Trinity trail here in tx.....would love to have an encounter like that....i ride those trails a lot and see a lot of beautiful ladies riding or jogging.....and you sure can't hide a hard on in those shorts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You lost me at "He's oriental"

I was struck by that too. I think there are still many people, especially white people, who say oriental when they mean asian people. I bet there are even women married to asian guys that say it. On the other hand, this could have been written by an older person who has not noticed the changes. The other part was the small cock of the oriental. Classic stereotype. Living in America!

Other than the stereotyping, nice bike ride descriptions and good blocking, as in the movement of the characters as they undress and move their hands and feet around.

dutchcan2dutchcan2about 4 years ago
Loved them all

Found your stories a couple of weeks ago and i have now read pretty much all of them I really enjoyed them i think you have likely hit all of my fantasies plus a few more and that is likely why most of us read the Literotica site and your stories are amongst the very best my only suggestion would be to connect those that tie together better like the professor with his wife in the army, and his experiences, The hunter fisherman and or the Scout/Guide master. it looks like it has been a while since your last submission but I will look for any new stories under this name if you have changed your nom de plume i would love to know so I can enjoy more of your story lines

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

WHERE is the rest of this story?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I thought this was well written. I had hoped as I was reading that this would turn out to be a role play between spouses, because that is hot. Come to find out it's just two cheaters. Squigy, and now smells like shit.

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