All Comments on 'Workplace Relations'

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bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 14 years ago
mixing the metaphors

i was confused by...'as she stood frozen, as if I had ignited some sort of fire within her. ' hot or cold? sexy story but needed some greater care.

manyquestionsmanyquestionsover 15 years ago
Sweet and hot

Both sweet and hot. Innocent and exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
lovely

very hot and sweet

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