All Comments on 'World Class 02'

She has to suck cock or what? She'll die? Go into anaphylactic shock? Get taken to heaven? Why exactly is she compelled to suck cock?

Then the idea that she's babysitting 18 yr olds or are you saying that she molested minors and then they blackmailed her? Finally, she is angry that John is forcing her to cheat; but then agrees to not suck her husbands cock for a week?

Are you trying to write a really poor story or is this the best you can do? If I were you, I would never write another story.

What the fuck is going on in this story - it makes no fucking sense whatsoever. The second the dumbshit shows the video to her husband, her husband will beat his fucking ass for raping his wife, just like he did to Bob. Yet she gives in? And he's going to buy his hypersexual wife suddenly going off the cock?

Think about what you're actually writing before submitting it. You started off on an okay premise, then completely fucked it up with the second chapter.

Where part 3

But the stories by this author all lack imaginative, clever story telling. This one especially is in need of a serious editor, more likely a complete re-write. Please stop now. Or don't . But I for one, will not be reading anymore of this mixed up trash.

UNO ESTRELLA FOR THE E...fart

This deserves more chapters.

Steve time to dump the whore

more cuck shit.