All Comments on 'Would You'

I don't recall reading something as jarringly full of fragmented thoughts and incomplete descriptions as this story and enjoying it at all. I don't recall reading something as unreadable as this, ever, in fact. It reads like the thought process of someone too drunk or stoned to communicate with anyone else. AD/HD of the keyboard, or what? Try again, or don't. How about this: Just don't try again. Retire. Please.

there was a way I could give this negative stars.

I don't know what I'm reading, I've even forgotten the language I speak I've never read such a disjointed, tangled story