by Wolf of Mibu 69
Very good job for a first time author. You did an ecxellent job.
I like the sex and even though it read as rough sex it was still very erotic.
It was a very good story, great job on your first venture. I liked the way you included light bondage and control into your story while still maintaining the feel of Erotic Coupling.
Sensual and respectful, it makes my pussy want to be sucked long and slow.
I am so hot for it now. Wonderful. A real turn on. More, please.
What woman doesn't want to be found so irresistable that she drives her man wild with desire. Rough, wild, consuming - mmmmmmmm good!
Looks like my honey wrote this from what we did together... everything is the exact of what we did. Is that you baby???
loved it anyway and i came reading this, reminded of what fun we had!!!!
OH My GOD!! If only all men could make a woman "writhe" the way that you do so perfectly in that story! I would love to be fucked & sucked like that!!