Wrong Beginnings

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jill_gates
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"Now ride me," Nicole commanded, still cupping Lisa's firm breasts in her hands. Her stern expression was more dictatorial than loving and Lisa, still nervous, started to move up and down, driving the phallus deep inside and then raising her hips almost to the dick's engorged head. The stiff cock was so much larger than the single, unfortunate time she lost her virginity that Lisa had been scared to take its full length inside of her. Now, her pussy filled to the hilt, she was loving the thick, hard dick's penetration. Skillfully, she manipulated her clit in time with her thrusts, her climax starting to build.

"That's it, Lisa," Nicole whispered, loving the feeling of Lisa's tight, voluptuous ass bouncing up and down on her, "Take that cock all the way inside of you. I want you to cum all over me." Shuddering, Lisa started to frantically play with her clit, the long fingers of her right hand moving in a short, tight circular pattern. Nicole thought, I wonder if she'll explode like I did when she fingered me. The gyration of Lisa's taught hips, thighs and buttocks on Nicole's already over sexed pussy was driving her insane. I need to cum soon, too, Nicole thought. Watching Lisa ride this dick is far sexier than I could have imagined. "Let me suck your nipples," Nicole said, pulling on Lisa's erect nubs so hard it hurt.

"Oh, god, yes," Lisa whispered as the pain brought her back from the edge, her nipples on fire. She leaned forward to allow Nicole's hungry mouth access to her perfect globes, the lightly tanned flesh unmarred by freckles or moles. Tongue flicking out, Nicole started to slicken the perky, pink nipples, caressing one then the other in concentric circles. Lisa shuddered with each lick, her pussy on fire, still grinding away on the huge cock, working her hips as she flicked her clit.

"Do you like my tongue?" Nicole whispered, luscious lips slick, mouth only the slightest distance away from Lisa's right breast. Nodding, Lisa looked into Nicole's eyes, begging in her mind to again taste her delicious lips and tongue. Nicole could guess what Lisa was thinking, she wants to kiss me, Nicole thought, her own orgasm building much more slowly. The grinding sensations of Lisa's shapely ass was still sending pleasurable tingles through her clit from the base of the strap-on but Nicole was starting to crave more attentive stimulation. Nicole opened her mouth wide then she bit down hard on Lisa's left breast, her pearly white teeth clutching the erect nipple almost to the breaking point.

The painful bite drove Lisa over the edge, her tight pussy clenching the strap-on forcefully as she slide down hard, her ass grinding into Nicole's while she shuddered. Even in the video, Nicole had never seen another woman experience an orgasm, and the sight of Lisa's glowing face, her breasts dangling erotically in front of her face, their nipples hard, made her want to experience more.

"Kiss me," Nicole whispered, taking her mouth off of Lisa's breast. "I want to taste your tongue." Lisa's eyes had closed tight while she came and she lost all ability to focus on anything other than her own throbbing pleasure. Her nipple seemed to pulsate in time with the echoes of her pussy, a line of pure, electrifying energy stretching from her engorged pussy to her nipples. Opening her eyes, Lisa looked searchingly at her friend, her heart filled to bursting with emotion, love and lust warring in her chest. She bent down, the stiff latex member still firmly lodged inside, and kissed Nicole passionately, her tongue delving deep inside, pushing the lingering taste of Nicole's sex into her mouth. The warm, wet kiss elated and sickened Nicole, the confusion in her mind telling her to stop but the heat rising from her tortured clit telling her to do more.

Lisa's lips and tongue were softer than Nicole had imagined, her skin so smooth it felt almost ethereal. After a moment, she started to lick and suck Lisa's tongue, finally starting to fully enjoy the feeling. Still shuddering slightly, Lisa started grinding her hips against Nicole, swirling the strap-on insider her, juices flowing freely from her massive climax. Nicole grabbed Lisa's hair while she kissed, finally pulling back, painfully griping the blond tresses. Blue eyes wide, Lisa looked confused at the rough treatment, staring at Nicole in wonder.

"After I fuck you, you'll make me cum again," Nicole murmured, almost wanting to stop right there and beg Lisa to eat her pussy once more. "I want to hear you scream," Nicole continued, grinning, "Now get off me, and get on your knees." Nodding, Lisa slowly rose up off the dildo as Nicole released her hold on her hair, the cock making a sloshing, 'plop' as it slid free of her wet tunnel. Lisa didn't know what Nicole planned on doing to her, but after cumming so hard, she found herself not caring what came next as long as Nicole kept touching her.

She got off the bed and knelt, facing Nicole, her chest pressed up against the side board. Her knees were on the floor and her ass was wide open, exposing her slick thighs and pussy lips fully. Nicole rose, getting into position to penetrate Lisa from behind with the thick cock. Lisa looked back, holding herself up on the edge of the bed and watched as Nicole knelt behind her, holding the phallus with her right hand and grabbing her ass with her left.

"Have you ever had something in your ass, Lisa?" Nicole asked, watching her friend's face carefully. Lisa shook her head negatively, blue eyes wide open and afraid. "Then why did you fuck me like that? Tell me now."

"I told you. I love the smell of your pussy," Lisa said, looking worried. "I didn't plan on penetrating you there but, I couldn't stop myself. I wanted to explore every inch of your body." The worried, nervous tone of Lisa's voice only emboldened Nicole. I'm going to give it to her, Nicole thought, hard, just like I saw her fucking me.

"You owe me," Nicole said, her posture almost exactly the same as Lisa's had been in the video. "I'm going to fuck you, and you're going to cum, hard." Gulping, Lisa could only nod, knowing that she had to take what she had given Nicole the night before. "Now you're going to tell me what you want me to do." Nicole smiled wickedly as she watched Lisa's eyes widen in confusion, then hissed, "Tell me you want this cock in your ass. Tell me you want me to fuck you until you cum, screaming."

Lisa loved the dirtiness of the banter and blushed, her entire face reddening. "Fuck my ass, Nicole." Her voice cracked and she shivered, her arms twitching as she felt the embarrassment flooding her. "Please stick that cock in my virgin ass, fuck me until I cum." Neck strained, Lisa turned around and buried her head into the coverlet, arching her back, lifting her ass in the air and spreading her thighs wide to allow Nicole easy access to her wet crack. Nicole slapped Lisa's ass cheek with her left hand playfully, making Lisa give a small yelp in surprise.

Carefully, Nicole positioned the head of the prick at the star shaped entrance to Lisa's anal cavity. "Are you ready?" Nicole asked softly, touching the cock head to Lisa's entrance without penetrating, just resting it there. In response, Lisa squirmed slightly, attempting to pull the strap-on into her ass by pushing back against Nicole. Satisfied, Nicole gripped Lisa's ass cheeks and started pushing, struggling to penetrate more than a centimeter inside. Lisa grunted as the cock slid in slightly, its latex shaft completely coated with cum from her massive orgasm.

"Oh, god," Lisa moaned, "That hurts." Nicole grinned, loving the idea of Lisa's ass being on fire from a hard pounding.

"I'll go slow," Nicole said, letting the strap-on cock's head stop, the tip only half way inserted into Lisa's tight hole. "Touch yourself," Nicole commanded, "Play with your pussy while I stick this in your ass."

Nicole saw Lisa's fingers between her legs, just below the cock, reaching back to slid two fingers into her wet pussy. She started pumping, finger fucking herself and making wet, squishy sounds. The sight was a major turn on for Nicole and she caressed her breasts, still almost but not quite mounted inside of Lisa's ass. She's going to make me cum next, Nicole thought, frustrated. She stopped tweaking her nipples and pulled back from Lisa's ass, withdrawing the dildo completely.

"What are you doing?" Lisa asked, intent on her fingering, wondering why the sensation of her ass splitting open had stopped. She wasn't eager to have that massive cock in her ass but she knew, from the commanding look on Nicole's face earlier, that nothing less would satisfy her friend.

"Going to stretch your ass," Nicole murmured, giving Lisa's ass another smack. "Let me loosen you up a bit." As she said this, Nicole pushed a finger into Lisa's pussy, joining the other two frantically pumping in and out. She withdrew it after a single, long push slickened the digit entirely. With her left hand, she smeared some of the still flowing cum from Lisa's thighs over the puckered entrance to her backdoor, making the light brown sphincter glisten. Lisa moaned as her fingers massaged the opening without penetrating her, the sensation far more pleasurable now without the huge cock attempting to split her in half. Nicole started to slid the wet finger inside of Lisa's ass, amazed at how tight it was, feeling the sphincter clench her knuckle like a vice. "Relax, Lisa. Just relax and let me in," Nicole whispered, feeling the pressure loosen.

Withdrawing the finger, she spread more cum over Lisa's anus, rubbing the ridged opening in a circular, massaging fashion. Lisa was still fingering her pussy, pushing her two fingers inside as far as they would go. This time when Nicole pushed her finger inside, it went all the way in, meeting no resistance. She pumped in and out once, then twice and took her finger out again. By repeating the process a few more times, applying more and more of Lisa's cum to her tight ass, she was able to get two fingers inside.

Squirming and moaning, Lisa started bucking her hips, pushing back against Nicole's thrusting fingers which she could feel through the thin wall separating her vaginal canal from her ass. "Fuck me," she cried, fingers flying, "Stick that big cock in my ass." Nicole immediately slid her fingers out and grabbed the phallus, pushing it up against Lisa's stretched out asshole. "Yes," Lisa cried, arching her back, pushing her ass far enough onto the dildo to feel the head pop inside, past her anal ring. "Fill my ass," she said, swishing her hips sideways, working the dildo inside of her.

Straddling her friend, Nicole gripped her hips tightly as she slid the cock further inside of Lisa's tight ass, carefully watching for any sign of pain or discomfort. I want her to scream, she thought, but I don't want to stop. This is too hot. The smell of Lisa's oversexed pussy oozing cum filled the room and all Nicole could do was to focus on how much she wanted to fuck her tight, virgin ass. After the dildo got half way inside, Lisa seemed to tense, her back lifting, pushing the dildo out slightly. Interpreting the signal correctly, Nicole started withdrawing the massive cock, backing out till only the head remained inside.

"Yes, fuck me," Lisa moaned, reaching back with her free hand to help spread her cheeks apart. Nicole slid forward again, going further this time, inserting the strap-on three quarters of the way inside before stopping. Lisa started panting frantically when the dildo stopped moving, rolling her hips, trying to stretch herself further to accommodate the dildo as comfortably as she could. Feeling naughty, Nicole spanked her ass, loving the way her hard buttocks felt against the flat of her palm. The pain seemed to help Lisa, along with the rolling of her hips, as she took the dildo deeper inside, Nicole pushing as she spanked again.

By this time, Nicole was spanking Lisa with each hand, alternatively lightly slapping her ass and pounding hard. Moaning constantly, Lisa bucked her hips, taking the dildo up her ass completely, feeling the rubber base touch her as Nicole bottomed out. Each breath Lisa drew was ragged, she felt as though the latex cock had penetrated through her bowels and all the way into her stomach. The ridged shaft could be felt inside her pumping fingers as she stuff two of them inside her wet pussy. Nicole knelt stiffly, loving the feeling of the strap-on's base pushing into her clit and started to feel her nipples, tugging them, flicking them.

"The cock is all the way up your ass," Nicole whispered, "Now I'm going to fuck you. Hard." Moaning, Lisa gasped in ecstasy as Nicole started sliding the cock back and forth, moving the phallus deep within her, always keeping the shaft more than half way buried in her rectum. Lisa's insides trembled as she continued stuffing her fingers into her wet slit, the stirrings of her second climax building. Her thighs were wet almost to her knees, which trembled, the force of Nicole's more insistent fucking causing her to almost lose her balance.

"Make me cum," Lisa moaned, burying a third finger in her wet cunt, loving the feeling of the cock as Nicole bottomed out again. "Almost there," she whispered, trembling violently, her ass clenching around the thick cock.

Unbelievably, Nicole felt her own orgasm swell when Lisa started shaking, her clit on fire from the strap-on's constant pushing and rubbing. Jamming the cock as far into Lisa's ass as it would go, Nicole arched her back, trying to delve deeper still. "Cum," Nicole whispered, squeezing her breasts, forefinger and thumb pinching her nipples. She could tell Lisa wasn't faking it as the blonde's body started shaking violently, her ass cheeks quivering as she gasped in a long, high pitched moan. The pain of her fingers clamping down on her nipples became pleasure as she realized Lisa was cumming, her slender back arched, ass pushed back into her thighs as far as she could go, the strap-on buried in her bowels. Nicole could feel the cum dribble down her thighs as Lisa climaxed, the smell of sex in the air multiplying. Moaning, Nicole came, too, her pussy convulsing, clit overstimulated by the strap-on buried inside of Lisa's ass.

Still quivering, Nicole withdrew, slowly, from Lisa's backdoor until the engorged cock head popped free. She could see Lisa's asshole stretched out, still almost an inch wide open, from her anal pounding.

Nicole stretched and stood, feeling drained after her intense orgasm. The massive phallus seemed to weigh twice as much as she stood. With a small smile, she started to unbuckle the straps in reverse order than Lisa had used to attach the device to her slim waist. I'm going to have to do that again, Nicole thought, surprising herself. She didn't scream nearly enough.

It felt an eternity to Lisa as the last vestiges of her climax left, her ass feeling empty and her pussy abused from her three fingered thrusting. She finally stood, feeling sore from the waist down, looking at Nicole's toned, slender body as she set the strap on harness down on the floor. Lisa opened her mouth to say something, then hesitated, unsure what to say or how to ask. She wanted more, not then, but soon and would do anything to encourage Nicole to fuck her once more.

As if reading her thoughts, Nicole looked at her and smiled, stepping close, their naked bodies almost touching. "Lisa," Nicole whispered, her eyes intent, dark eyes boring into blue, "Never, ever fuck me again like you did on that video." Lisa nodded, "What did you do to make me sleep through the whole thing?"

"I gave you, well, I think it's called the date rape drug." Lisa looked ashamed, a blush staining her face all the way down to her collar bone. "I'm so sorry. I'll never do it again, ever. I promise." Nicole nodded, her expression grim.

"You still owe me," Nicole whispered, reaching out to tweak one of Lisa's nipples. "And you're going to do anything I want." Lisa could not imagine what else Nicole would want, as she had done everything, even things she had never dreamed of, with Nicole already. "You're my slave," Nicole whispered, leaning down to caress the nipple she pinched with her tongue. She gave it a lingering kiss, then straightened, looking Lisa in the eyes. "You will do what I want, when I want it, without hesitation or negotiation. Otherwise," Nicole smiled, a wicked, evil grin, "You'll regret it every day for the rest of your life. Do we have a deal?"

Lisa looked worried, wondering what else her roommate, her best friend, had in store for her. The ache in her thighs, her pussy and her ass filled her mind as she thought about what else Nicole might want and she quivered, knees wobbling, imagining Nicole eating her pussy or fucking her again. "Yes," she finally whispered, gazing into Nicole's eyes with a loving expression. "I'll do anything for you." She put on a grin and thrust her breasts forward as if to emphasize their larger size, "Anything."

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SnuggliciousSnuggliciousover 10 years ago
I'm just saying...

I do understand and agree with an author warning its readers if his or her story deals with controversial topics. Rape is no joke and not many are interested in stories of that nature. However, I do not think that a writer should be penalized for how they decide that their characters should deal with a particular issue. Realism within fiction does make for better reading but is it a requirement?

Writers do need to be careful of inconsistencies as it does throw off a story. Editing is not just about grammar and punctuations but about being coherent.

LesbianChickLitLesbianChickLitover 10 years ago
Strained Suspension of Disbelief

This should have had a courtesy warning about nonconsent. Honestly though, it's not like it's a subtle work. You could pretty much surmise that the roommate was drugging and raping her in the first couple paragraphs. Also, rape and its attraction for the victim is an entirely legitimate literary concept, (Atwood's "Rape Fantasies" for example) granting the subject is treated with all the sensitivity of chainsaw by some of the authors on this site (JimBob's "Explanation of Love" for example.)

Demanding realism in fiction is an entirely legitimate literary position as well. Hell, Verne and Wells acknowledged that difference of writing theory while still enjoying each others' works as fathers of science fiction of all things.I could believe Nicole's reaction as a revenge fuck, recognizing that she worked through a number of highly complex emotions with remarkable alacrity, but a story has to make sense within itself too. Beyond Nicole's repeated confusion as to who was putting words in her mouth (clearly the author), I couldn't get past her noting that the strapon was bigger than any of the porn stars she'd ever seen...right after we learn that she's never watched porn and only seen her brother's magazines? Coupled with the unlikely stream of consciousness from Nicole, that and the other logical inconsistencies strained my suspension of disbelief too far.

The author is clearly talented, but I think the story in its current form only works as a FMBM piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Are you kidding?

I definitely understand what fiction means and that it is the authors right to bend and create a reality that exists outside of this reality. However, if you are dealing with rape, you should forewarn your readers so they have the choice to read or not. Not doing so was irresponsible of the author and as such, if there are readers who are offended or frankly pissed off about the story, that is their right as well. Forget it being unrealistic, that isn't a proper description. It was malicious, stupid, and frankly a gross misrepresentation of rape. The fact is she never really addresses the issue of rape, blaming it on her confusion and being shut down with her first crush is unforgivable. Fiction is not about allowing us to say whatever we want, it is about creating a story, and the story created, in my opinion wasn't that great. The friendship between the roommates seemed forced and I doubt that was the intention of the author. So yes, I understand what fiction means, I also understand what trigger means and if the author wants to write about controversial topics such as rape, they should have the courtesy to write a warning. If they do not they subject themselves to the anger of a readership that had they known about the topic would not have ventured into the story. Continue to write just be aware of other people's sensitivities. Rape isn't a joke, it isn't just another overreaction. It is a real problem, and as an author you should respect it. If you have any issues with this comment. Feel free to contact me. a_m_19@outlook.com I may write back... but ultimately I don't want people to discount my comment because it is anonymous. Yes, I am anonymous, but it doesn't mean what I wrote is any less right.

SnuggliciousSnuggliciousover 10 years ago
It's called fiction.....

Fiction is the form of any work that deals, in part or in whole, with information or events that are not real, but rather, imaginary and theoretical—that is, invented by the author.

I don't think many readers understand the term fiction. Of course its unrealistic.

I like your writing style and enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is kind of

unrealistic. I mean, if I found out my roommate had raped me, we wouldn't then go on to have sex. Complete violation of trust & privacy and I probably would've beat my roommate senseless. Forget having been wronged before, that had nothing to do with Nicole who was a totally different person than the other girl. It read well & your style is great, I just couldn't get anything from it, though.

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