by Gamina
Had me blow my wad several times! Love a lesbo getting drilled! maybe for the sequel Yan can share his gf with everyone too!
I like the story, I had to spend the whole day reading itr because I cam to fast, but you kinda glance over... everything... the fucking, the bodys, the whoile exsperince
A tiny bit of tuning and it would be great... no I mean god like
little bit crowded -
Everything that COULD happen, DOES happen, even though it seems to break the laws of physics at times... And it's so dense, it's kind of hard to read, especially when you're meant to be masturbating to it? Etc. And again, SO MUCH is happening, you can't really enjoy any one thing. You have that whole superiority complex that Sophie has, but then she's being used, too? You have that whole humiliation thing, but it's not really fleshed out. Also, spelling and punctuation errors are just annoying.