All Comments on 'Wrong Side of the Bridge Ch. 02'

Liking this budding relationship. They're learning how to love together! *snif*

This is the coolest story because of the realism of them not just jumping into bed. It's humorous, sad, rewarding and sexy all at the same time. I want to know everything about these two. How amazing is it that Damien is this badass who has only thought of his own satisfaction until he meets shy little Eli and now it's all about him instead. And omg- "Would you like some sex later?" was one of the funniest lines ever, as if he's offering him a cookie instead of trying to tempt him into bed.

I love the way this relationship is developing. They are both so wrong and so right for each other. Elijah is just a sweetheart and Damien is a true diamond in the rough. I look forward to reading more.

My favorite line: "I was so much stronger than him that I could just strangle him right here and now and there was nothing he could do about it."

I've never read anything like it, but it's... romantic.

more.... hurry

This story is AMAZING! I agree with the other comments, I love how they are taking it slow, developing a relationship, not just jumping in to bed. Great job! Do I dare hope that Chapter 3 will post tomorrow?

I am loving this story, great job!!

can't wait for the next chapter!

:)

I was so glad to see this second posting up so quickly after the first. I love the balance in the relationship. With both of them having some naïveté and some experience.

I like that it is new for Damien despite his experience. They are on the same footing almost for new experiences. I only question why Eli didn't help Damien get off when he knew how it was to have it be a one-sided experience. Hope he evens it out next! This story is very very well-done.

but that's not at all due to the quality of the writing. Oddly enough, the flow seems to work for the characters. The stereotyping and the characterization fits the story, and the setting, to a tee. I enjoyed Ch. 01 and Ch. 02. Nicely done.

Oh, the only typo I saw was 'taught' for 'taut'. Homonyms. Taught is past tense for teach and taut meants tight. Since you might use that adverb again I thought I'd share that little tidbit. Otherwise, as I said before, quite well done.

You, my friend, have talent. Lots of talent. I really, really like this.

hot story, and great writing..... keep it going this way, and I want to see Elijah get fucked by Damien

Fascinating story. Not over the top dramatic but lots of true life angst. Like how Eli is the shy one but in some ways Damien is just as uncertain. Hope Eli jettisones Pete for good and sticks with Damien. They make a good couple. Love is a learning curve.

MORE.... :( my poor boner

Really, I'm not kidding, this is a really good story (and way hot!) so don't stop now! (for what it's worth I would love to hear about Pete's reaction if Eli & Damian bumped into him at a show and it's something like "Oh, hi Pete, this is Damian, my boyfriend.") :D

fucking great. fresh new story great loving it. thank fuck he dumped the fat fucker

I love this story. Damien just looking to get in Elijah's pants but has all sorts of restrictions over stuff he won't do and then he's doing them for Elijah because now it's more than just sex and he cares about him.

Was so hot through every word.

Major problem with this story is summarised in the sentence "I spend most my free time hanging around outside anyway". Damien is a loser.

I really really enjoy your story. It's awesome to see someone write about people from different walks of life getting together and enjoying each other. Maybe even having a meaningful relationship. And Damien is NOT a loser. He's just a little lost and searching for something. So thank you, I'm enjoying it very very much!

Anon 6 years ago,

Your argument doesn't make any sense. This must be coming from a massive loser that stays inside 24/7 without any capability to socialize nor function in the outside world, huh?