by hotpup
One more great story. I dearly loved it and as always i enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the great work. I could only give you a 5 but it should have been 100. TTFN
Yellow Panties was truly a wonderful story of passion and lust between a mother and son. I felt so good in my crotch while reading Hotpup's dtory that I came very close to cumming in my pants. And that's saying something, since I'm only eighteen years old and still havent gone through puberty. This is just my preference, but I would prefer white cotton panties, where a watcher can see the yellow stain of dried (or wet) cum on them. With yellow panties, the yellowish color of cum would be difficult to notice. But thatnk you anyway for a story well told.
I do love vhen women are using different colour.s in their silkpanties. Pink, ligth blue and yellow are my favour colours.
And specially in lovely mom and son stories.
It really worked i have tried this on my mom yesterday and she turned on and we had a good night yesterday i wanted to fuck my mom from 2 years but i didnt find any trick, i m very thankfull to the author i have told my mom about this story Thanx once again
it was a good story well told the only porbleem i can see with it is some of things you have your mother saying are totaly unbelievable like
----"There Is no turning back now fuck wad; squeeze the holy shit out of mommy's boobies.
thats just one example there were more.other than that it was good.
A quite well written work. Some of the language, though, needs work. You don't expect any Mom to use some of that langiage unless you are really low bred. I find it not so enticing to use vulgarity for "dirt's" sake. Vulgarity has it's place, I also use forms of it, but not in the context you have written.
Sorry, but that is mt opinion!
All women's underwear is not sexy, a lot of it is capable of killing passion in seconds
It was great to re-visit this story from so long ago. This author's collection is worth visiting.
I FUCKING LOVED THAT STORY!!!!......but the whole thing where she died...im sorry but that ruined the mood of the whole thing...
MOST OF YOUR STORIES END WITH,
SOMEONES ALWAYS GETTING IT IN
THE END, THAT'S A BUTT FUCK.
NICE JOB, BUT BACK OFF THE BUTT
FUCKING. THANKS
This story is more about rape than a loving son and mother. It's obvious that the son doesn't respect or love his mother from the way he treats her, he just wants to fuck her. The language is kind of juvenile and demeaning, when he's taking to her. When he tells her she has a fat ass, that just floored me. I'm not sure there are many women want to be told that.
This story is more about rape than a loving son and mother. It's obvious that the son doesn't respect or love his mother from the way he treats her, he just wants to fuck her. The language is kind of juvenile and demeaning, when he's taking to her. When he tells her she has a fat ass, that just floored me. I'm not sure there are many women want to be told that.
Its funny how you visualize the people your reading about, how they come to life , his way of getting his mom i could never have done, but it worked for him, and i wish there was more.